How to Save a Life

March 8, 2013
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Feeling the cold ground below hid feet, the soft crunch of the delicate herbs, William began making the potion in a desperate attempt to revive his beautiful wife, now ice cold to the touch, from the unforgiving grave. The sweet smell of frankincense flooded his nostrils as he scampered around the room running the seemingly endless list of herbs in his head trying to come up with the perfect combination to bring his limp wife back from the darkness of death.

William caressed the cold face of his love Cassandra, who had her soul stolen away by a silent killing fever that had wiped through the village only three days before. No amount of potions or poultices would heal her of her illness before it was too late. They told William to give up, begging him to let her go. No, even after death he could not give up on the love of his life.

He grabbed jars after jars of herbs and ingredients ignoring the clanking and rattling sounds they made. He dug his hand into a jar of marigold and enjoyed the refreshing cool feeling of the petals swimming around his fingers. Poppy seed, dead bees, comfrey, yarrow leaves, dill weeds, the names were buzzing in his head, pounding against the sides giving him a nauseas feeling as he crammed them into his potion bottle. Neptune’s tears, child’s fears, a goat’s ear, and butterbeer, he mixed and shook his pungent smelling concoction until it turned from a sickly green, to a glowing florescent purple color.

“This is it.” William whispered. “Time to come home my sweet Cassandra. Don’t give up on me.” As he walked over to his pale wife, the herbs around him overpowering the scent of decaying skin, now taking over Cassandra’s body that used to smell of sweet vanilla. William’s eyes started forming tears at the thought of getting his wife back.

As he got closer to her body, and his eyes welled up showing his sadness, he failed to see a loose stone on his cobblestone floor and stumbled. The glowing purple bottle of life landed with a crash on the hard ground leaving nothing but shattered remains. The purple liquid once overpowering with beauty began mixing with the calcium, sediment, and brimstone deposits in the floor, blending with the dirt sabotaging the mixture. The now sickeningly yellow potion spread across the floor towards William like a predator crawling in to kill his prey. As the potion engulfed his hand William felt a piercing pain ripple through his body from head to toe.

William’s body started to burn as his skin stretched and tightened feeling heavier with each step. His hair grew rapidly and turned grey with his coming age, his nails slowly pulling themselves out of their place as they grew. William fought his way up with his now aching hollow bones. He limped across the room trying to grab hold of anything that could give him support and relieve him of his growing pain. He hurriedly began working on an antidote for his fast aging curse as his spine began to arch and slouch. His eyes became a blur and his nose now blind from scent as his body prepared for rest. He began waddling on his great journey again back to the table on which his wife lay. He chugged down the antidote and felt his now 95-year-old body slowly shapes itself back into its 30-year-old form. His senses suddenly rushing back to him as his skin nourished and his mangy grey hair retreated back to his scalp and returned to its healthy straight brown locks. He rushed over to his loves side once more and slowly opened her mouth. Her rotting breath and yellow teeth no longer repelling as he dripped the repaired purple potion into Cassandra’s mouth. Cassandra’s frail body began to violently shake. Pale skin now tan, drenched white hair now curly and golden again.

Cassandra opened her milky white eyes as they glowed and shimmered replacing the dull color to its original soft icy blue radiant color. She opened her now full lips and leaned towards William’s crying astonished face and in a shaky croaked voice she rasped, “I knew you wouldn’t give up on me”.

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Bela said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 2:00 pm
Congrats!!! Your writing is so good!!! :D
hello said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 1:56 pm
That was really good keep writing!
Alex A. said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 1:55 pm
really good dude!
momo said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 1:55 pm
you did a really good jod
$$$$$ said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 1:53 pm
Great job Marco, this story was extremely entertaining and very descriptive.
Tyrone Biggums said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 1:18 pm
Good story mann wilson seems like a cool dude to do all this for his girl samantha or some stufff mann yup aha
iona.p said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 1:11 pm
Wow. I'm seriously impressed.
paigec said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 12:59 pm
I go to SEMS too and I eard about your story. It was really good nice job!
hiii said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 12:31 pm
that was beautiful!!!!!
Tyler said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 12:25 pm
I really like your writing, like what you wrote about. its verry interesecting 
KJM98 said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 12:24 pm
This story shows the sheer talent of some of the youth. It shows how death is dark and lonely while even though it is inevitable, if you love someone enough, you cannot accept they are gone. When one of my close family members recently passed away, I wish I had some kind of potion to bring them back. Innitially when I read this, I was oblivious to the fact that I believed a 7th grader wrote this. Now that I am aware, I would be honored to shake your hand. When I was in 7th grade, I cam... (more »)
eddie123 said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 12:23 pm
it was a very good story, so detialed and rhymed nicely
hijk said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 12:12 pm
good writinggggggg
t_rone Gaffny said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 11:47 am
writting was swagadelic. it was great
Mr.T said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 11:44 am
Wow, I really wish I could write a poem as great as this! It is wonderful
catherinecrain4 said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 11:42 am
it was really good and very emotional!  - from a fellow sems student
Violet S. said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 11:42 am
Your  story was full of emotion, and was very touching to the audiance. Keep it up! ~Fellow SEMS student
semsstudent said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 11:42 am
Dear fellow sems student Your story was full of emotion and was very touching. It was well put togeather and kept u engaged. GOOD JOB :)
ehfiubvbv said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 11:41 am
Nice story and I liked how descriptive your story was!
mikailas said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 11:40 am
You did an amazing job!
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