(Preview) In the MIdnight Forest (pre. Hunting the Immortal)

December 19, 2009
By Ren_Miyazawa GOLD, Anna, Texas
Ren_Miyazawa GOLD, Anna, Texas
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We run through the Midnight Forest hunting Nightmare "Rai I see him" I whisper to her as we chase him. "Ren should we split up or stay together?" I thought for a second but still couldn't deside "stay together he might have the others with him." I got pushed into a huge tree before I noticed that Cain had come after me and nightmare had Rai tied up. "Ren HE..." He knocked her out cold as I watched them drag her off "Rai Rai don't leave me not yet. Sis I love you...." i whispered and the world turned black. I woke up the next day the sun was peaking over the trees shining right in my eyes "RAI RAI where are you" I yelled as loud as I could. The forest answered with my faint call not even a wind blew the world felt still to me Rai was gone. My one and only sister my twin my beloved sister by everyone. "What did I do wrong this time Alki?" I set off my finder so he could come and find me I tried to stay awake but couldn't I fell asleep the ground was moist and it started raining. I awoke three hours later. The forest grew dark. "The immortals will be out soon they will kill me." I tried to stand but couldn't. I saw Alki running toward me and I fell in a deep sleep due to dehydration and lack of food we had been chasing after midnight for three days with no food or water. I woke up when we were at his house. I was on his couch. "Finally your awake!" I looked at him. "Rai no!" His bronze hair lay short and his bright green eyes happy and looking at me. He was wearing a black shirt and black jeans. "I know Nightmare took her. you ok only a broken leg and a few miner bruises and scratches." His smile made me feel happy to see him but I was still sad for losing my twin....to be continued

The author's comments:
this is what happened 10 years before she went looking for Rai. Ren and Rai Miyazawa are twin vampire hunters. (love to write stories including vampires and Japanese or just odd names)

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on Jan. 8 2010 at 7:19 pm
Ren_Miyazawa GOLD, Anna, Texas
12 articles 2 photos 1 comment
Thanks its random its not all the way finished book just started writing it its hard writing 3 books at once....

on Jan. 8 2010 at 7:03 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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huh. An interesting preview.

But I like it.



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