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oh how wrong humanity was.
i shouldered the heavy load, aand kept stumbling forward. i looked around the sea of other robots. when one robot, Ai-ti betreyed his master, we were all accused
i remember the last day, Tommy crying into my shoulder. i felt greif beyond beleif, but i couldnt cry. robots dont haave tear ducts.

i heard a voice, "Keep moving!"
i stepped forward in time with the others... left right left right.

humans didnt know that we werent a bunch of mindless hunks of metal. we haad developed life and emotion. another robot in the shape of a smaall girl got yanked out of line towards the crushers. i walked faster, head down.
i haad to live.

the robot in front of me turned and smiled. it was Ai-ti. i felt a shiver of fear



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QuestionAuthority said...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 8:49 pm
This was really intruiging :)
 
actorsarecool said...
Jan. 7, 2010 at 1:12 pm
I enjoyed this peace! Good Job.
 
writerslover said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 9:59 pm
This is sooo good!!!! It was written soo well. I love it!!!!!!!!!
 
Secreteer replied...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 8:30 pm
really. i was so embarassed when it was published cuz i thought it was horrible
 
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