WE CAN FEEL

October 8, 2009
By arElana PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
arElana PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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oh how wrong humanity was.
i shouldered the heavy load, aand kept stumbling forward. i looked around the sea of other robots. when one robot, Ai-ti betreyed his master, we were all accused
i remember the last day, Tommy crying into my shoulder. i felt greif beyond beleif, but i couldnt cry. robots dont haave tear ducts.

i heard a voice, "Keep moving!"
i stepped forward in time with the others... left right left right.

humans didnt know that we werent a bunch of mindless hunks of metal. we haad developed life and emotion. another robot in the shape of a smaall girl got yanked out of line towards the crushers. i walked faster, head down.
i haad to live.

the robot in front of me turned and smiled. it was Ai-ti. i felt a shiver of fear



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on Feb. 4 2010 at 8:49 pm
This was really intruiging :)

on Jan. 7 2010 at 1:12 pm
actorsarecool SILVER, Zanesville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"You can be happy, you just haven't found it yet."~ A random stranger.

I enjoyed this peace! Good Job.

on Dec. 17 2009 at 8:30 pm
arElana PLATINUM, Fair Lawn, New Jersey
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really. i was so embarassed when it was published cuz i thought it was horrible

writerslover said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 9:59 pm
This is sooo good!!!! It was written soo well. I love it!!!!!!!!!




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