Gone With The WInd

August 25, 2009
By RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments

As I glimpsed into his eyes I thought I knew it all...I thought I knew his story. When I looked into his hazel eyes, I saw green clouds, dissolving and saw him crystal clear... but what you think is not always what you get...

It all started when I was wandering outside my town. I drifted up towards a grassy hill and then sat down. I leaned on a tree trunk and slowly drifted into a trans...

All a sudden I felt two soft and very calm fingers touching my shoulder. As my eyes opened it felt as if someone was opening curtains because when I opened them all I could see was the relfection of his eyes and his red lips. Our eyes connected...as through it was meant to be... That moment I knew we were meant for each other...

As I opened my mouth to say something to him, The wind started to blow and all the leaves circled around him. As the wind slowly directed into a diffrent direction and blew away so did he.

I thought I knew him but now I don't know if it was a dream... Or I was imagining things...Or maybe he was there... Whatever it was, we were never meant to be because he is gone...forever



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bribri123 said...
on May. 21 2012 at 8:22 am
i thought this was amazing. ur an excelent writer and that would be a great future for u :)

on Feb. 1 2012 at 11:33 pm
PeNfReAk10 PLATINUM, Chino Hills, California
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Favorite Quote:
When life hands you lemons, take the seeds and plant them.

Um...this was...INTERESTING> it was somewhat confusing, yet your details were superb and I really liked it. But...I can't help feeling it's missing something...It would probably be better if in a poem or something, but I still like it. :)

on Aug. 31 2011 at 7:33 pm
SomethingCalledTerra SILVER, Budd Lake, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Pain is temporary, quitting lasts forever"


-Lance Armstrong

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This was REALLY good! And like writerfreak I'm SUPER sorry to advertise, but I submitted an article called Dazanian Wars: Part 1 Chapter 1. Its in the most recent section on the second page. I would really love some feedback, the only feedback I got is from my mum's friends and mine. Thanks!!

on Jul. 18 2011 at 8:23 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

It was was AWESOME!!! great job! (Sorry for advrertizing) I just wrote two stories called nightstalker and the beast. If anyone could check them out and post some comments and feedback that would be great. Thanks! and keep writing everybody! :)(:

on Jul. 18 2011 at 2:43 am
Anerio_Deorma BRONZE, NULL, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
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This was exellent, however, this is the third thing in the sci/fi section that was exactly the same as what was in the "Personal Experience" Section. What's with all the depressive stories? I read the sci/fi section to be spirited away to another reality. Not read a emo's mind.

 

I apologise. This was exellent, thanks for your time.


on May. 30 2011 at 6:39 am
PaintingTheRosesRed BRONZE, Newark, New Jersey
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Wow this is so good! You're really descriptive and leave me wanting more.

(P.S. I live near Glen Rock, NJ!)


RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 1:25 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
thanks I appreciate the comment

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 1:24 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
thanks! :)

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 1:23 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
thanks for the comment :D

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 1:23 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
thanks for the comment

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 1:23 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
thanks! :D

on Feb. 14 2011 at 2:11 pm
traveler03 GOLD, San Juan, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Living is nothing. Dreaming is something.

I love the mystery and it gets you thinking if that actually happened.

Sweety pie said...
on Nov. 5 2010 at 2:56 pm
Very nice!! I felt like it was supposed to keep going. Very romantic and intriguing.

darkvisions said...
on May. 26 2010 at 7:57 pm
darkvisions, White Plains, New York
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Beautifully crafted...excellent description =)

on May. 26 2010 at 6:34 pm
CanYouSeeTheCrazy PLATINUM, Cle Elum, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I know why everyone in this world is so desperate to find love."
"Oh yeah? Why then?"
"Because, it's the closest thing we have to magic."

oh, wow. i feel moved. and as if i was the girl sitting against a tree. i love it

Panther84 said...
on May. 4 2010 at 11:19 am
Panther84, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Just keep moving

A Perfecy  Poem

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 1 2009 at 2:17 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
wat do u mean????????????

on Oct. 21 2009 at 2:39 pm
LegacyPen BRONZE, Hudson, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
(my continued bio) Infinity, or Destiny of Infinity on here, is a total of 82,860 word count. I am in the editing process.

Aww...thanks :)

I will definately read the other articles you have!

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 20 2009 at 6:32 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
56 articles 0 photos 89 comments
ur and thanks for the comment.

Ur such an amzing writer to

on Oct. 20 2009 at 6:26 pm
LegacyPen BRONZE, Hudson, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
(my continued bio) Infinity, or Destiny of Infinity on here, is a total of 82,860 word count. I am in the editing process.

I liked it a lot! There were a couple of errors (such as 'all a sudden'should be 'all of a sudden'), but I liked how you made it short, like the mere breath of the wind...the title suits it.

Oh yeah, by the way...thanks for commentig on Vibrancy! I really appreciate it!




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