My First Kiss

November 6, 2017
By Katiej5745 GOLD, Auburn, California
Katiej5745 GOLD, Auburn, California
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The moon reflected on his eyes, making them sparkle. He looked at my lips and smiled, and I smiled back. Moving my hair behind my ears as I blushed. Our lips touched like there was no tomorrow, it felt like time stopped.


My heart pounding, and my thoughts racing. It all happened at once. At the hill, in the small town of Forest Creek.


It was so passionate, there was almost no words to describe it!


As he move away me beaming, still holding my jaw in his hand from when we kissed. He blushed, and grinned. We both knew that this night wasn't a regret. It was like magic, on that moonlit night.

The author's comments:

I am re-poating this story, after editing my origanal version that I deleted called "First Kiss." I hope you enjoy my edited version of my original. 

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on Dec. 13 2017 at 2:34 pm
DarkPoet SILVER, Crosby, Texas
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Now i really enjoy this story.Nice Job

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