Cambio Network
Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Love Doesn't Wait

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
Bailey


Bailey was walking down the hall, looking back behind him as he did. He was nervous and couldn’t quite catch his breath. There was no way he could go through with this.

He had to listen to Taylor, she would get mad, very mad if he didn’t go through with their plan. The gun was shaking in his hand, he tried to steady it.

Tears ran down his cheek, and he slowed his walking. He turned around. ‘I can’t do this, I can’t do this!’ He thought over and over. He began punching the walls of lockers, his knuckles began to bleed.


Taylor


Taylor waited in her Science class, but Bailey never came. She commenced to biting her nails, counting down the minutes to when she would hunt down Bailey and beat him.

Anger was bubbling inside Taylor, she was going to snap. The gun in her purse was calling to her, she restrained herself. She started laughing to herself, she had to leave now before she would lose control and lash out.

She was tapping the desk and glaring at the door. The bell rang and she hurriedly grabbed her things and left through the front door. No one stopped her, no one ever stopped her, she would forever be invisible.


Bailey



Bailey waited for Taylor outside in the parking lot. He was still shaking, he had wrapped a cloth over his bruised knuckles to hide the bleeding.

He looked up and saw Taylor making her way through the lines of cars. He knew what was coming, she punched him.

“What the hell! We had a deal! What did you decide you are to much of a good boy to do this?”

“No.”

“Then what? You backed out. You’re too afraid now? You didn’t seem so scared when we came up with this plan!”

“I’m sorry.”

“You will be.”

Bailey watched Taylor walk to her car. She drove away, and left Bailey in the middle of the parking lot, looking down at the pavement.


Taylor



Taylor sat in the car fingering her gun. Her face was pinched, she was waiting. School was starting in thirty minutes, she wasn’t nervous, she knew exactly what to do.

She put the gun in her purse, and slowly got out of the car.


Bailey



Bailey was sitting at his desk looking out the window when he heard it. One, two, three gunshots, then screaming, the alarm goes off. People are running past the door, the classroom begins filing out.

Bailey runs down the hallway with everyone else. Girls are cowering in corners while boys are trying to convince them to get up and run. More gunshots are going off, Taylor has finally snapped.

Bailey turns the corner, and Taylor is standing there, blood smearing her shirt. He watches her raise the gun.

“Taylor, put the gun down. You can’t do this anymore. This isn’t you! Please Taylor, listen to me. Please.

“I loved you Bailey. You never noticed. I loved you.”

Bailey stood there looking into her eyes.

“Please, if you truly love me, you’ll stop.” Bailey pleaded.

Taylor began to cry,”I love you. I just want THIS to stop.” Taylor raised the gun to herself, and fired.

“No!” Bailey ran to her and cradled her in his arms. This is how the police found them. Bailey was sobbing when they took her body away. Her blood covering his shirt.

Bailey loved Taylor too. He always had. He had never gotten a chance to tell her. Bailey is now serving time in prison for assisting in the planning of the school shooting. Not a single day goes by when he wishes he could take it back, take everything back.




Join the Discussion


This article has 7 comments. Post your own!

LashontiThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 1:59 pm:
This is really good.
 
Emmabug25 replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 5:21 pm :
Thanks it took only a few minutes to write. I hope everyone likes it
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
StarChild said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 11:06 am:
it ended so suddenly i didnt get a chance to enjoy the story. also it was a great piece of work but i think it would've been better if you had put what they thought in the different points of view...
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
ags_586This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 11:17 pm:
its really good!!!!
 
Emmabug25 replied...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 9:40 am :
Thanks! your poems are amazing!
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
lucybrownThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 4:46 pm:
This is really interesting! I like how you wrote the story from different perspectives. I think it might be a good idea to add some more details, and it seemed to end a little abrubtly. I'm a little confused as to why Taylor shot herself also. Maybe you could explain a little bit more? But other than those few things, nice job. I liked reading this.
 
Emmabug25 replied...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 8:49 pm :
Thanks I appreciate the advice!:D I'll keep that in mind for my next story.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Site Feedback