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In love at last

April 28, 2011
By todie93 BRONZE, Moreno Valley, California
todie93 BRONZE, Moreno Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
dont let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game


She hugged me and i knew right then and there that i was in love. But something was keep us from moving forward like i had hoped. I've haven't had the best of luck with finding the right one for me but this time i think love and faith is on my side. I have been hurt by many of people but when i saw her smile i figured that she wouldn't harm me...well that's what my head was saying but my heart as always saying totally different. Her smile and presence made my body tingle, her eyes made this smile appear upon my face. But i will not let myself get close to her that night when she hugged me i felt safe like a child when they held by their mother. But will i let this terrible feel continue inside me or will i let go and let our love overflow into our lives?


The author's comments:
this piece was inspired by a previous relationship that i was in and the guy was afraid to love.

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on May. 9 2011 at 12:31 pm
A loved filled story that is spectacular I applaud your beautiful story

HayWay GOLD said...
on May. 5 2011 at 9:28 pm
HayWay GOLD, Draper, Utah
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FOUR SQUARE!!!!!! :)

I love it!!!! thats how i feel about love too, im kinda scared to fall in love with anyone :p but i really love this piece :)

on May. 5 2011 at 9:08 pm
Stpaulian BRONZE, Kewadin, Michigan
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Bad Spellers of the world 'untie'.

This was so sweet.