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Hold me close, kiss my lips gently, and whisper that you love me in my ear. When my tears fall, take your hand and wipe them away softly. Tell me everything is going to be alright. Run your hand though my hair and slowly down my back to my waist. Kiss me passionately. Make my heart skip a beat, make me lose my breath when I look in your life, and if I ever left there would be no would left for you.
Then after all of the, wake me up from my dream.



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Just.A.Dream said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 6:43 pm

I love this. :) I don't get why more people don't read your work!

The emotion that was in this piece, even though you didn't realize it at the time, was amazing.

I love the way you described what you thought love was like and then at the end, you were brought to reality.

The feelings shown in this poem were great! :) The only suggestion I have is to break up the lines (for readability), but the writing itself is perfect the way it is! Good job! <3

 
Lostandconfused replied...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 6:46 pm
See this is what i still think love is about. Cuz i have had my parents as a great model. But i just realized that it would never happen with the guy i wanted
 
Just.A.Dream replied...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 6:54 pm
It'll happen with the guy you're meant to be with. <333
 
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