My Guy =D

October 13, 2010
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"How would your guy be?" you asked.
"Smart, intelligent, cute, funny, lame, crazy, humorous, you know the usual. The one who would say i was the prettiest, and shower me with gifts and flowers. But first, when I look into his eyes, i should know that he is the one" I replied.
"Looks like you're talking about me" you said.
"Nop-"
"Yes" you replied before I could complete and pulled me so that I would be facing you.
I closed my eyes.
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I opened them, and looked into your deep brown eyes.
Love happened.
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D***! You were right, again. :)





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COEURDARKO said...
Oct. 17, 2010 at 3:06 am
I've Rated\. This was an easy FIVE star. But i think it's the style of your writing that makes the story great. I can really connect to it.
 
thestorycritic replied...
Oct. 17, 2010 at 5:59 am
ThanQ so much! :)
 
COEURDARKO said...
Oct. 15, 2010 at 3:35 pm
Cute! I think this is very sweet. It makes me have a warm feeling inside. Please look at One Cold Morning for me, tell me how it is!
 
thestorycritic replied...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 1:40 am

:D Thank you. 

N yes, I'll tell you =)

 
thestorycritic replied...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 1:43 am
I can't see any of your work :( Can you like send me the link?
 
thestorycritic replied...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 1:43 am
Also rate my works if possible
 
COEURDARKO replied...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 3:15 pm
Just search for the title: Skythe, and follow my link from there!
 
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