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A deep secret part 2

CHAPTER 2

I slowly opened my eyes and then closed them quickly. The sun was very bright.
I felt someone place there hand on my forehead. "Someone bring me some water" I heard from a distance. I wanted to say no but I guess that ball hit me in the head harder then I thought because I couldn't get the words out. All I could do was moan.
I heard a little voice say "Here you go Jake".
I opened my eyes then and tried to sit up but when I did that Andy ,who was the one who brought the water, tripped and the cup of water fell on me.
"Well that woke her up" I heard someone say in a smug voice.
I looked around and saw Madaline smiling a wicked smile.
I tried to sit up but I fell back down.
"Ow" I muttered, I felt someone grab the top of my arms and pull me up.
I looked up to see it was Jacob who had grabbed me. "Can you stand?" he asked.
I shook my head yes, he let go of me and I tried to stand straight. It wasn't immpossible but it hurt.
I looked at the little kids surrounding me and that's when I saw Andy.
He looked so sad that I knew in an instant that he was the one who had kicked the ball.
"Andy" I said quietly "I forgive you". The poor boy! he ran up to me and hugged me so hard I thought I wouldn't be able to breath.
"I-I'm so sorry Le--Leah" he whispered.
I patted his head "Its alright Andy it wasn't your fault" I said "What do I always tell you when accidents happen".
"The ball goes where it wants to" he whispered.
"Thats right" I told him "Go with the others and kick the soccer ball'.
Andy left and I turned back to Jacob, "Thanks" I told him.
He shook his head and went back to sit Madaline.
I let out a little sigh and ran my hands through my hair.
Jacob Wright held me ME ! in his arms, I let out a little shriek and went back to teaching the kids.
Hoping I would see Jacob tomorrow

(To be continued)



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Mandinova said...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 4:54 pm:
Please please write more!!!
 
AlyssCross replied...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 3:03 pm :
I'll try soon
 
snowanngel replied...
Oct. 28, 2011 at 9:49 pm :
I like keep going!
 
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Lonleydandy said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:51 pm:
More, more, more, more, more please!
 
Lonleydandy replied...
Sept. 6, 2010 at 2:55 pm :
WHERE, may I ask, IS THE REST!?
 
AlyssCross replied...
Sept. 11, 2010 at 7:09 pm :
I'm writing it will be on soon
 
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Hope_is_everywhere said...
Jul. 10, 2010 at 3:30 pm:
when are you going to write more?
 
Lyrabear replied...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 12:33 pm :
I'm sorry I haven't written more its just that I didn't think people actually liked it
 
Hope_is_everywhere replied...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 10:34 pm :
I like it ALOT!!!!!!!!!!
 
Lyrabear replied...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 6:58 pm :
thanks a bunch I really appreciate it!!!!!
 
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cafelene said...
May 18, 2010 at 10:58 pm:
write more.... please? :) i like this story, it's cute!
 
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melone96 said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 3:56 pm:
i liked the first one more...the cliff hanger u placed on the first was good but the chapter leading up 2 it wasn't as good...don't take it the wrong way, this was good but keep writing so i can keep reading more and more!
 
lyrabear replied...
May 2, 2010 at 8:19 pm :
i see what you mean i'll try to do better thanks
 
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erika4964 said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 5:12 pm:
This was a cute story it already has me wanting more. Keep writing!! ;)
 
lyrabear replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 5:14 pm :
thanks i'll try
 
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Tamara said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 10:34 am:
more i need more hurrry and right more lol
 
lyrabear replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 4:27 pm :
thanks im taking a break from it but i'll try
 
Tamara replied...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 10:36 am :
ok lol as long as i get more hehe ur writing is really good though
 
lyrabear replied...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 5:03 pm :
thanks i'll try
 
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The Reader! said...
Dec. 3, 2009 at 10:42 pm:
That was good. Can't wait to read the next one.
 
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