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broken hearted, and happy endings

As each yellow petal gently pulls off of each daisy, its a field of daisies. tipical story, girl and boy, girl likes boy, boy likes other girl...A girl sits in that same meadow, she grabs each daisy and picks each petal saying " he loves me, he loves me not, he loves me..."all of a sudden he, her crush walks in the meadow... "hey" he says, the girl whispers gently "hey". a tear rolles down her cheeck, he sees the tear "whats wrong?" he asks "nothing" she lies, " well if it makes u feel anybetter, im always here for u as a ... boyfriend..." he says. she asks "what about your girlfriend?" " we broke up" he replies her question, "oh.. oohh..." "so we're gf and bf?" "yes call you tommorow" he replies. "bye" she says. he walks off, turns and blows a kiss, and leaves. "omg! a dream come true!" she thinks and giggles. a happy ending.




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HarvestMoonFanatic14 said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 9:22 am:
It's too short... and it seems, as Cicichildress said, like he asks to go out with her with out even knowing her.
 
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Cicichildress said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 9:35 am:
Well it was okay it needs cleaned up a bit and a little longer it seems like they became a couple without knowing each other.....
 
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msoccerm345 said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 6:30 pm:
umm okay. i think you have a good like topic for your story but it would be a lot better if you make it longer and make some major corrections. im not hating. a lot of my writings actually start out like this but i go back and make them into the writings they are now. so just take some time to clean it up and you will have a great story on your hands
 
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ImNotAStalker said...
Sept. 22, 2010 at 4:17 pm:
uhhhhhhhhhhh............. srry but that didnt cm very good 2 me.......... it cmd lik at the end u jst got bored and started riting lik u were txting
 
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musiclover123 said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 4:35 am:
cute story!happy endings rock =P
 
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Do u care enough? said...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 10:04 am:
Yay I love happy endings!
 
star_561 replied...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 4:41 pm :
i love happy endings 2! lol
 
Do u care enough? replied...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 4:53 pm :
This was such a good story!
 
star_561 replied...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 4:56 pm :
it only took me two minutes to think of this but i still like it! thanks!! : )
 
Do u care enough? replied...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 5:00 pm :
It was short but sweet I love it!
 
star_561 replied...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 6:18 pm :
yeah it is and this story came from my life cuz i like this guy who likes someone else...: ( so yeah....
 
Do u care enough? replied...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 6:59 am :
That happens to me all the time
 
star_561 replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 4:49 pm :
yeah but i also liked this guy for 2 years now.
 
Do u care enough? replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 6:13 pm :
Yea well I liked a guy since I was in sixth grade and he was in seventh and now I'm dating his brother!
 
star_561 replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 6:18 pm :
ooooooooh!!! lol
 
Do u care enough? replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 6:29 pm :
Yea i like him a lot more than his brother the one I'm dating I mean
 
roxistar_561 replied...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 4:40 pm :
nice. interestin
 
adorabiblegirl replied...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 3:42 pm :
yea we broke up
 
HarvestMoonFanatic14 replied...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 9:24 am :
Crazy, Do you care enough?
 
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Fredwardness said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 9:14 pm:
i think i would like this better if this was longer, and if you actually took the time to spell out words like "you" and omg just sounds kinda flakey no offense =) good job other than that
 
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