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The Piano

September 1, 2009
By Anonymous

The dark room. The cobwebs forming on the skirting boards.
The long forgotten piano in the corner.
The thin layer of dust collected on the neglected keys. The faded fabric of the stool; lying
on its side.
The memory of it's past elegance lingering long past its abandonment.

-----
The woman lowers herself onto the piano stool self consciously. She steals a glance at the
man standing beside her. He smiles, and nods at her encouragingly. She turns back to the
piano, and, taking a deep breath, rests her fingers on the keys.
She plays the first, sweet note, and, relaxing immediately, gives herself over to the
music.....
The song changes, becomes staccato, and deeper. Her fingers move across the keys
expertly, flowing easily with the familiar music. She smiles, reveling in the release, as her
inhibitions float away, and she pours all of herself into the song, basking in the joy the
song always induces.
The music changes again, becomes softer; slower as the song draws to a close. The
woman lingers on the final note, holding it until it fades out completely. She grins up at
the man with her new found confidence, and he stares back, wide eyed, with unabashed
shock. He snaps out of his reverie abruptly, and scoops the woman up suddenly in a tight,
passionate embrace....


-----

The slightly faded colour of the once sleek black body. The air of neglect encircling the
grand instrument.
------
The man and the woman sit at the piano together. The room is brightly lit. The song is
gentle, and gorgeously sweet. They laugh. They smile. They play pieces for each other,
sitting in awed silence at their turn.
They play together, their fingers dancing across the keys in perfect unison. He smiles at
her, and abruptly pulls his fingers off the keys; cutting the note off; and slowly lifts his
hand to brush it along her cheek. He trails it down to her neck, and then leans in to press
his lips to hers....

----
The quiet, unobtrusive beauty the piano encapsulates. The tangible air of secrecy and
mystery surrounding it; the chapters of its past locked away, not to be seen again.
-----

The room is dimly lit, the candles on the piano top sending shadows flickering onto the
walls. The man leads the woman into the room, their fingers intertwined as he sits her
down on the stool at the piano. He sits on the other side of it, flexing his fingers before he
positions them on the keys. He smiles at her, before glancing once more at the
handwritten sheet music on the stand.
The song starts off slow, gentle. The woman stares wide eyed as the mans fingers move
across the keys. The song picks up pace slowly, becoming dramatic, and layered. Chords
mixed in with complicated beats. Staccato bass notes and soft sweet treble notes all
mixed in together; Yet all the notes complimenting each other perfectly.
The song stops abruptly, and the woman looks up to see the man sliding the music across
to her side. He points to the next few bars; indicating for her to play them. She plays
slowly at first, sight reading. Her harmony is sweet and lovely, soft and delicate. She
stops where the music ends, and slides the music back into the middle of the stand. She
leans up and gives the man a thankyou kiss, before they each pick up a pencil, and get to
work finishing their song....

------

The under spoken experience of the instrument – the years of providing comfort and
solace. The years of being a confidant, a friend, a hard surface to put things on. Sharing
in times of joy and happiness, and times of despair; all in the past, yet giving it a lasting
wisdom.

----

The couple stands at the piano. The room is dark. The woman sobs, trying to choke out
words through her tears. The man simply stares down his nose at her, and continues
towards the door. She screams out again, begs him not to go, but he only shakes his
head, and shuts the door behind him.
The woman stares in shock at the door, trembling in the middle of the room. Her eyes
dart to the piano suddenly, and she lets out a soft whimper at the sight. Silent tears
stream down her face as she runs out of the room, slamming the door behind her....

----
The comforting sturdiness of the instrument. The definite strength it can offer, through
the gift of music.

----
The woman walks towards the piano. She smiles in spite of herself at the sight of it. It is
not a happy smile. She braces herself against the flood of memories that come at the sight
of her piano, wishing now that she had not chosen this place – though, it seemed the most
appropriate – where else better to go at the end, than where everything began in the first
place?
She continues on towards it slowly, shuffling her feet. Of course she had found her way
back here at the end – the place; the object that held so much significance for her, even
before her life was shattered.
She lifts her hand almost hesitantly, and runs her fingers across the body, admiring the
trails they leave in the dust. Her fingers twitch towards the keys. She almost wishes she
could play something. She laughs humorlessly to herself – of course she does – She had
abandoned music for a long time, but doubts that it could ever be pushed entirely from
her system.
She turns her back on the piano abruptly. Slowly, she pulls the knife out of her pocket,
and runs her fingers softly along the blunt side of the blade. She sighs audibly. How nice
to believe that she had succeeded for once; that she could make it back from her depression
But she was never going to find her way back. She was never going to be alright.
So why keep on trying?
She turns to face the piano again. If only he could see her now. See what he had done.
Would he come back to her, if he could see what she was going to do?
She snorts to herself. Of course not.
She smiles a last, wistful smile at the piano....

----


The dark room again. The cobwebs covering the walls. The peeling paint.
The old grand piano.
The inch thick layer of dust covering the once polished body. The sleekness, the subtle
majesty of it, commanding respect and reverence.
The sheet music, left on the stand, where it will wait dutifully to be
played again.
The piano, holding such secrets and symbolism for two people, once loved; now
forgotten; and forever tainted with bittersweet memories, and the blood stains on the ivory keys.



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L-Jay8 said...
on Nov. 9 2010 at 10:52 pm
L-Jay8, Melbourne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"These violent delights have violent ends, and in their triumph, die, like fire and powder, which, as they kiss, consume,"

- William Shakespeare, Romeo and Juliet

Thankyou for your comment, I appreciated it very much. Sorry that you found the timeline confusing; the paragraphs alternate between a description of the couple in the "past" and a description of the piano in the "present". And no, her lover never found her...

Gadzooks GOLD said...
on Nov. 8 2010 at 6:15 pm
Gadzooks GOLD, Kentwood, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Handle everything as gentle as you can. And what you cannot put right, you must make as little wrong as possible." Thomas Moore

that was beautiful. your piece flowed and there was just harmony within it.

on Oct. 12 2010 at 6:13 pm
CrazyWriter GOLD, Lorton Station, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Once you have given up on the most important thing in your life, you begin to die, because then, you gradually lose your true self"~Hana Kimi
"Someone who can lie to themself. . . is lonely, and in pain"~Hana Kimi

AAAAAAMMMMAAAAZZZINNNNGGG!!!!

I play the piano too and it usually takes a beating after a long day any ho

you were very descripitive which is great so A+ in that area but i found the time line and differnet sections confusing because one second you see them playing, then the next there still playing and then fighting and then dying. Please connect the dots for me. Your writing is realtable which is awesome. and by the looks of it  you got a lot  of responses which means you did your job right. anyway i agree that this IS one of those story/articles that you can read over-and over again and get a different message every time.  the way you ended it was perfect. It gave me the impression that the piano aways holds secerts and got me wondering if her lover ever found her?

so all in all A++

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HMessinger said...
on Oct. 3 2010 at 7:57 am
absolutley beautiful!

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:52 pm
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

i loved your choice of words, you were very descriptive about it and the characters, they never talk but that's how you know they are deeply in love( except at the end ) and i absolutely LOVED how you switched from the couples to the result of their coupling and at the end it all blended together perfectly, one of the best i've read on this site :) keep writing!

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:50 pm
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

agreed!!!!

on Aug. 7 2010 at 2:07 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

wow.  this is definetly one of those peices that you read over and over again, getting more and more out of it each time.

SillyMonkey7 said...
on Jul. 16 2010 at 10:39 pm

Wow....I don't know what else to say.... that was amazing. I was so...moved by this piece. I am literally speechless. Beautiful

 


Emmaline said...
on Jul. 16 2010 at 5:39 pm
This is really cool! I happen to play the piano. I luved how you described when he played it!  brillant

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on Jul. 16 2010 at 4:31 pm
inspir3d GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
We're all just looking for attention, to be discovered overnight. We're all frustrated by the popular ones that claim the limelight before they fall to pieces. So many of us are stuck under the radar--what makes me different? You decide!

Breathtaking. It takes real talent to be able to describe someone playing a piano piece while keeping the reader interested, and you did that!!! Fantastic job, keep writing. :)

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necnec said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 9:58 am
necnec, Summit, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Malice towards none and charity towards all"

You have so much talent. This is the most beautiful piece of writing on this website

No words I say can describe it


on Jun. 2 2010 at 3:29 pm
yourgrandpasakeeper11, Rayville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't leave the one you love for the one you like because the one you like will leave you for the one they love."

Amazing. I'm speechless.

on Jun. 2 2010 at 10:25 am
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
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Incredible.  Plenty of imagery.  Keep writing.

on May. 11 2010 at 2:56 pm
unwrittenlove DIAMOND, Mount Berry, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be" -anonymous

OMG! I loved this! It was so good! I could feel the emotion in it! :) My favorite part is the last few words, "and the blood stains on the ivory keys." You are amazing! Keep writing! :)

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on May. 4 2010 at 3:47 pm
Kat2292 BRONZE, Canfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, call it version 1.0." ~Mark
"Life's like a novel with the end ripped out." ~Rascal Flatts

This was amazing!!! So beautiful, full of emotion, and symbolic! One Of my favorites for sure!

melodeess GOLD said...
on Apr. 19 2010 at 1:24 pm
melodeess GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
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great job! :] i love playing piano and this really added emotion to the instrument and the beautiful music which it produces. amazing!

Haizea said...
on Apr. 19 2010 at 7:51 am
Wow... that was absolutely amazing

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on Mar. 6 2010 at 5:56 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
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" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain

Hey this was great!!! Great detail! Keep writing

on Mar. 6 2010 at 11:07 am
potentialgurl BRONZE, Quincy, Illinois
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"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." -Eleanor Roosevelt

Very, VERY good. An excellent piece! Keep writing!

on Feb. 11 2010 at 10:52 pm
Silverae BRONZE, Hermosillo, Other
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WOW!!! the best i've seen in here, definetley! Your are amazing!!

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