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Love On the Rocks

August 25, 2009
By Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
13 articles 0 photos 46 comments

"And cut!" Shouted the director. "That's a wrap! Good job today, but you can all be better! So go home, practice, and rest! I'll see you all bright and early tomorrow for the first show!"

Packing up her bag, Melinda glanced around the room.

"Where is he?" she whispered to herself. "He told me he'd meet me here after rehearsal."

Stuffing her last ballet slipper into her duffel bag, Melinda swung it over her shoulder and began out of the auditorium.

"I can't believe he did this to me again," she thought to herself as she let the door skip closed on its own.
• ~ •

"Hey! How was your day?" Drew's computer chirped as his message was sent.

Melinda glided her mouse over to the small red box on the top of the chat window that had just appeared.

Waiting a few minutes before resending his message, Drew glanced at his buddy list. Scrolling down to xxgottaluvmexx he double clicked and started typing; momentarily forgetting about midgetmelinda.

"Hey Courtney! You were amazing in rehearsal today!" he chirped over to xxgottaluvmexx. Then realizing he hadn't received a reply from Melinda, he scrolled back to the top of his buddy list and double clicked on her name.

"Melinda?" he sent.

With a deep sigh, Melinda clicked on the chat window from XlovemedeadX.

"What the hell do you want??" She typed into the small box, but before hitting the return key to send it, she thought better of it and deleted her message.

"Hi." She decided to send instead.
•••••

"Oh hey Drew! Thanks! You were great too!" Drew's computer pinged in, as Courtney replied.

"Not nearly as great as you! But thanks anyways!" He argued as he chirped back. Talking to Melinda and Courtney at the same time was challenging but being that he could sense the tension with Melinda, he decided to focus on talking to Courtney instead.

"Haha I'm not really up for arguing with you Drew," Courtney laughed as she typed.

"Good! Then I win by forgeit! =]" Drew gloated.

"haha surreee I guess so. lol so how are you?" She asked, trying to change the subject.

"I'm good thanks!" Drew replied with a glance over at Melinda's chat. "How are you?"

"I'm pretty good. Just tired I guess." Courtney hinted.

"Oh...are you sure? Do you want to talk about it? I'm here for you," stated Drew sincerely, holding his breath while waiting for her answer.

"Oh, no thanks...umm it's a long story. I'm fine. Besides - isn't Melinda on? You should talk to her... I'm getting off anyways. Thanks tho!" Drew's computer pings again, his heart falling as he read her message.

"No problem! I'm always here for you Courtney! But have a good night! I'll see you tomorrow at the show!"

"Right! Okay, thanks. You too. See you then! Night Drew." Courtney's computer chirped as she sent her good-bye.

"Good-night Courtney."

Saving the chat, Drew closed the window and opened up Melinda's again, her "Hi." still waiting for a reply.
•••••

"Hey! How was your day?" he enthusiastically typed.

"Just dandy." Melinda chirped.

"That's great! Right?" Drew bubbled.

"Not really-" she sent, starting to type why; Drew decided to reply first - not acknowledging her message.

"My day was great! We had a sub in english and we watched a movie in history. Then we had rehearsal, but after rehearsal Dillon, Charlie, Jeff, Sarah, John, Mary, and I went to get ice cream. It was HILARIOUS!" Melinda read, deleting the message she had planned on sending him.

"Good for you." She sends, hoping to get her point across.

"I know right?! I had a blast! You should have come!" Drew continued to bubble into his chat.

"I wasn't invited." Melinda sent blatantly, closing the window hoping that he'd just shut up for once.

"Well it was great!" popped up Drew's screen name, XlovemedeadX. "Anywayssss," he prolonged. "I'm gunna go. ttyl!" his chat chirped on Melinda's screen. Before she could reply to say "bye," a message popped up in faint grey lettering.

"This user is currently offline," it read.

Fan-freakin-tastic she thought to herself.


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on May. 23 2010 at 6:51 am
Chinadoll BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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It draws you in...I love it. Once I started I couldn't stop

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on May. 16 2010 at 7:23 am
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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aww, thank you! that means a lot to me :)

i will keep writing, i promise :) and hopefully turn them into books one day :)


jenm614 BRONZE said...
on May. 15 2010 at 6:36 pm
jenm614 BRONZE, Kennebunkport, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest, and live life like you had one day left

Thats so good!!!!! I was expecting like a whole boook, omg that was awesome!! !Please write more!!!1 If this stroy was even longer, as in book size, i would deff buy it and read it! Nice job!!!

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on May. 15 2010 at 3:46 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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awww, thank you :)

i'm glad you liked it :)


on May. 15 2010 at 2:41 pm
Bella913 SILVER, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Death is easy, living is harder."

amazing!!!!!!!

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 6:59 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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haha I thought it fit the situation well =)

thanks for commenting :D

on Mar. 10 2010 at 6:27 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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LOVE the end 'fan freaken tastic'

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 12:01 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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Thanks for your comment!

I couldn't agree more =)

on Feb. 24 2010 at 10:13 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

That's sorry.... Guys are such jerks sometimes!!

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 2:28 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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he IS a jerk! =)

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 2:27 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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thanks =)

will do!

on Feb. 2 2010 at 10:50 am
AmazingGrace88 GOLD, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
No boys are worth your tears,
and the ones who are wont make you cry.

Haha this made me laugh because its so true and says so much haha, keep it up! :)

on Jan. 27 2010 at 9:41 pm
pfeferminz SILVER, Sebastopol, California
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone has the right to be stupid but some people abuse the privilege......

he sounds like a jerk lol :)

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Nov. 4 2009 at 5:11 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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thank you =)

biddycakes said...
on Nov. 4 2009 at 5:02 pm
biddycakes, Charlotte, North Carolina
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haha and yes VERY realistic

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Nov. 4 2009 at 4:20 pm
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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realistic? =)

i agree...it sucks.. but makes a great story =)

biddycakes said...
on Nov. 4 2009 at 4:08 pm
biddycakes, Charlotte, North Carolina
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wow that was good but now melinda isnt happy and that drew guy seems like a heartbreaker! and a jerk!

on Sep. 28 2009 at 10:20 am
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

K, will do! Thanks again. ;)

on Sep. 28 2009 at 10:18 am
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

Will do!!! Thanks again ;)

Nikki_G GOLD said...
on Sep. 28 2009 at 10:02 am
Nikki_G GOLD, Marlborough, Massachusetts
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That sounds like a great idea!!!

Thanks!

If you have any more details you'd like me to incorporate into the story let me know :)