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Officially, the only thing I have to remember you by is the picture of you. That’s all my parents let me keep before they burnt everyone other thing you ever gave me. It’s a good picture. It captures everything from the dark messy hair, to your gorgeous smile to the sparkle in your eyes.

Of course you left me with so much more. The memories. Talking for hours. Laughing for no reason. Sneaking out in the middle of the night just to see you. And your warm hand in mine.

But I've hidden those memories deep inside of me. When you were first gone, I woke up several times in the dark, screaming your name. The name I was ordered to forget. The name I would never forget.

So I keep you a secret. No one knows what a big part of me you still are. And so no one can take that away. You are so much to me, that I cant forget you without forgetting myself.

But no one knows that. To them, the only thing I have is the picture of you.




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Dancing2222This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 11:39 pm:
Love this!!!! It's very short which I think adds to the importance of every word. This captures so much emotion and detail in such a short amount of time! I wish you would add a beginning that reflects on him and their relationship, but overall, one of my new favorites! Keep on writing:)
 
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emoducks said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 10:29 am:
this was great :) i didn't think it would be that well written considering it's short, but it says a lot :)
 
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xBaByGiRrL22xThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 11, 2010 at 10:45 pm:
woww. incrediblee. I thought it was just going to be those really short sappy storiez, ya know? But i'm so happy I read it all the way through. I love it; It's so powerful and deep. The last few lines gave me chills. Memoriess. Both the strongest and most painful or amazing power of rememberance that we can havee. awesome job!
 
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McKenna said...
Oct. 1, 2010 at 4:48 pm:

The same exact thing happened to me 6 years ago, but I don't have a physical object to remember him by. Just the memories. No one knows, except for me. I miss him so much still.

I love you story.

Too bad yours is fiction and mine actully happened.

 

 
RebelBelle replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 9:03 am :
I feel your pain, McKenna. I don't have a picture either, just a million amazing memories.
 
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yvonne2012 said...
Sept. 5, 2010 at 6:47 pm:
i want a love like that! its such a good story. short, sweet, and to the point. it captured my emotions. 2 thumbs up.
 
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megs95 said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 2:18 pm:
This was a great story! i have a question though, why was she forced to get rid of everything he gave her and to forget his name?
 
JS2992 replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 1:14 am :
It's up to you, really! If I had wanted everyone to know I would have put it in the story. But this way every one can come up with their own ideas.
 
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sidneynicole said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 10:00 pm:
this wass really good :)
 
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JS2992 said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 6:47 am:
Thanks for the feedback guys, I apprechiate it. Glad you enjoyed!
 
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tgir85 said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 10:19 pm:
and i gave u five satrs which u clearly deserve!!
 
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tgir85 said...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 10:18 pm:
this.completely without one single doubt describes how i feel right now in every single way possible.....thank u i love it so very much please keep writing!!! i am forever your #1 fan!!!^^
 
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