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September 11, 2012
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looking up to the sky wondering if she should end her life. cindy feels as if she doesn't belong in the world. with knife in one hand and her other hand sticking out. she puts the blade to the vain.

"STOP!!!" she hears somebody shout. she didn't care and started to cut her skin. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?!!!" she hears the voice again. this time she looks in fron of her.

there she sees her crush! she is shocked! she looses control and the blade cuts her wrist!

"NO!" screams he quickly pulls out his phone to call 911. but.... it was to late

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mourningflower said...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 10:18 am
it's good, but in the future being a little more descriptive would add a greater sense of witnessing the incident, good work though :)
luvcats22 replied...
Sept. 21, 2012 at 4:08 pm
thanks for the comment
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