A Boy To Me (Not a Big Deal)

August 15, 2011
"I am in love with you," says the man. He looks more like a boy to me but it does not seem like a big deal. The girl, nice face, small waist, looks at him and she is glad to hear that. "I know," says the girl. "I have known for a long tie" He wants to hear what he wants. "I love you too," says the girl and the man who looks more like a boy to me is glad.





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Lizzy16 said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 2:52 pm
i totally agree!
 
mimirocks124 said...
Aug. 18, 2011 at 6:14 pm
wow, i really love this! i love the one-syllable thing and the message is so cute !
 
Harebelle This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 6:52 pm
This is so sweet! The use of the one-syllable words makes it really simple and allows the meaning to come through. Great job!
 
Bagheera-Rose said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 12:53 pm
It seems almost poetic, and sort of sing-songy. I really enjoyed this peice. It did turn out well. Good job!
 
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