Mistakes

April 19, 2011
By Rosie2210 BRONZE, Pewaukee, Wisconsin
Rosie2210 BRONZE, Pewaukee, Wisconsin
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Three o’clock in the morning. A rock hits my window. Drowsily, I wake up, walk to my window and peer outside. There, my boyfriend of two years stands, waiting for me to sneak out. This isn’t me. I’m not that kind of person.

Quickly, my shirt and pants fly on. I quietly open the window and climb onto the roof. Why am I doing this? I ask myself. Down the rain gutter and into the hands of my boyfriend. He takes me to his car, and we zoom away. In the parking lot – now what have I done. I tell him I want to go home. He doesn’t listen.

Two hours later, I’m back in my room. Unable to sleep. His face keeps appearing in my mind. I can’t get rid of it! I realize that I hate him. Why did I do that. What will my parents do? I know what I will do.

Three o’clock in the afternoon. What happened last night? I can’t stand not knowing. Hop in my car, go to Walgreens. Spend $10 on the one thing that decides my fate. I can only hope for the negative reading.


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Hover BRONZE said...
on Apr. 24 2011 at 8:30 am
Hover BRONZE, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Sophistication isn't what you wear or who you know
Or pushing people down to get you where you wanna go
They didn't teach you that in prep school, so it's up to me,
But no amount of vintage dresses gives you dignity.
~Taylor Swift
*Defy Gravity!*

Wow, duh. :/  Can't believe I didn't see that. But anyway really good writing - nice and short, but meaningful. :)

on Apr. 23 2011 at 10:08 pm
StayClassy1 SILVER, Stockton, California
5 articles 1 photo 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Buy me food so i know it's real"

Really good... i have a few friends that have made those same mistakes, and regret it... Good job writing. You didnt use much words but still got the point across. Amazing. :) <3

on Apr. 23 2011 at 10:07 pm
StayClassy1 SILVER, Stockton, California
5 articles 1 photo 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Buy me food so i know it's real"

She's talking about a pregancy test. :) <3

Hover BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 2:40 pm
Hover BRONZE, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sophistication isn't what you wear or who you know
Or pushing people down to get you where you wanna go
They didn't teach you that in prep school, so it's up to me,
But no amount of vintage dresses gives you dignity.
~Taylor Swift
*Defy Gravity!*

I'm really sorry if this sounds stupid but I just don't get what happened at the end! :/ What did she spend $10 on?

Signed, Confused


PJD17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 1:43 pm
PJD17 SILVER, Belleville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I do the best imatation of myself- Ben Folds

Thats great!  i really like how much you were able to do with so few words  that is very impressive keep it up!  could you please check out and comment on my story Numb.  i would realyl appreciate the feedback




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