Jamie

December 21, 2010
By Celia PLATINUM, London, Other
Celia PLATINUM, London, Other
41 articles 5 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When your life flashes before your eyes, make sure it's worth watching" - Unknown


Creak. Tap, tap, tap. Creak. Tap, tap, tap. The rhythm of jazz always seeps nightly into Jamie's footsteps.

The smell of rust and sewer cloud the leaking pipes above. Brick walls are tarnished with fumes and gathering dirt. The alleyway is lit only by the dim flicker of Teresa's Café sign. Here was Jamie's place. Here was Jamie's life.

Unemployed? No. Unhoused? Maybe, but maybe not. Jamie's secret dumpster home was cozy, warm, and disgusting. More or less it had more character than any other "home" on the street. And it was next to Teresa's, so all was well.

Or so he hoped. Cold reality sometimes nipped Jamie in the trembling night.

Did I say trembling? I meant treble clef. Jamie was a keen saxophonist. He often filled Teresa's Café with swelling sounds of loneliness, however sometimes he threw a little funk in here and there. He blows through the reed for relief, not just [for] music. All that coffee makes him shake time to time. He drinks so much of the stuff that caffeine practically runs through his veins. Heck, he probably sweats it, too.

Creak. Tap, tap, tap. Creak. Tap, tap, tap. The rhythm of jazz always seeps nightly into Jamie's footsteps.

The author's comments:
This piece could possibly be used as an introudction for a future story, but I thought I would submit just the introduction first because I thought it had some meaning.

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on Dec. 30 2010 at 9:15 am
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

oooooh... yea, on it's own it's nothing more than a nice picture, but i bet this would be a great introduction for a grander story. I loved the line about "trembling/trebleclef"... nicely done. Check out my work if you ever get the chance.




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