If only I could get him to look at me in a different set of eyes. Ones that would think of me as girlfriend material, instead of friend material. Him & I have been friends since third grade. He always loved to be outside, doing something active. Now, he is on our high school football team, with his "Blonde & Beautiful" girlfriend, Sienna. Why would he want someone like me to be the one he goes to dances with, and is publicly known as an 'item' with? Why would he want some 5'6 black haired guitar player as a girlfriend, when he has his beautiful blonde Sienna. No doubt, Sienna and Him will get married after high school. It would't be surprising. I start picturing a wedding, but in place of Sienna, would be Me. Me & Him. Him & I. Smiling, no. Grinning, at each other while we say our vows in passionate, loving voices. If only he could see, we are meant to be. I just want to be more then friends. A lot more. I know we need to be, so why not start now?
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Great job, just change Him and I(2nd line) to He and I. Delete the with after item. It's not needed. If you fix those up, this will be really good! I really like your reasoning too! Well done!
Thanks<3 also, I am having a hard time finding your work......can you send me a link?
I really like it! I can relate to it. You only have one grammatical error, as Healing_Angel said.
Iwrite....(sorry your screen name is really long). Type my screen name into advanced search(in author's screen name). If that doesn't work, tell me.




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