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If only I could get him to look at me in a different set of eyes. Ones that would think of me as girlfriend material, instead of friend material.  Him & I have been friends since third grade. He always loved to be outside, doing something active.  Now, he is on our high school football team, with his "Blonde & Beautiful" girlfriend, Sienna.  Why would he want someone like me to be the one he goes to dances with, and is publicly known as an 'item' with? Why would he want some 5'6 black haired guitar player as a girlfriend, when he has his beautiful blonde Sienna.  No doubt, Sienna and Him will get married after high school. It would't be surprising.  I start picturing a wedding, but in place of Sienna, would be Me. Me & Him. Him & I. Smiling, no. Grinning, at each other while we say our vows in passionate, loving voices.  If only he could see, we are meant to be.  I just want to be more then friends. A lot more. I know we need to be, so why not start now?

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Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 11:46 pm:
Great job, just change Him and I(2nd line) to He and I. Delete the with after item. It's not needed. If you fix those up, this will be really good! I really like your reasoning too! Well done!  
IWriteBecauseItsFunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 8, 2010 at 6:56 am :
Thanks<3 also, I am having a hard time finding your work......can you send me a link? 
Mimi8 replied...
Nov. 8, 2010 at 5:54 pm :
I really like it! I can relate to it. You only have one grammatical error, as Healing_Angel said.
Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 1:17 am :

Iwrite....(sorry your screen name is really long). Type my screen name into advanced search(in author's screen name). If that doesn't work, tell me.


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