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love comes with a sacrifice

October 27, 2010
By giiglez SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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I was dating this guy for a long time. He wanted to "do it". I refused , so that night he snuck in my room and raped me. Before he left he said"Sometimes love comes with a sacrifice." A few days later I told him to go to the cops,but he refused. That night I snucked in his room and held the gun to him and said."Love comes with a sacrifice." I shot him but he didn't die. His parents came and begged him to tell who did this. But he refused and they said,"Love comes with a sacrifice." A few nights later he came to my house and asked to come in. Of course I refused, so he snuck in. He sat on my bed looked me in thhe eye and said I love you and thats two words I couldnt refuse.

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BrokenInnocence said...
on Nov. 24 2010 at 5:19 pm
ok i agree here what happened??????? did she stick with him or what? oh and i love the part where she shot him he totaly deserved it :)
TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 20 2010 at 10:23 am
oh ok it was just a joke then. why did tatyana do what she did? this is what i'm asking you giiglez, cause if she wants to in-a-way shove me off to the road. why couldn't she just say we'll keep a distance or so? this is what i'm asking you not her, since she doesn't want to talk to me.
TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 2:49 pm
okay giiglez i'll do that.
giiglez SILVER said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 10:24 am
giiglez SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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ont like you i really DONT not tryin to be mean taty is just messin okaiii

 

giiglez SILVER said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 10:18 am
giiglez SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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idk she is her own person it mostly has to do with when we first got in a conflict she only forgave you because i told her too and she just doesnt se how she can be your friend when that happened also she really wants you to stop posting stuff on her poems like that if its not about the poem dont tlk its getting akward to her and dont post things about her on my poems i really dont mind but thats you guys conflict dont put me in it i told her that too she said she has nothing against you

 

Tatyana DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 10:16 am
Tatyana DIAMOND, Colorado, Colorado
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dude...non of my poems has nothing to do with you we cant be friends was based on my friends relationship andbeautiful lie is about my bf
giiglez SILVER said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 10:12 am
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okaii thanx ill remember  that
TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 8:47 am
Tatyana, >:( . . . idk what's in your head, i really . . . idk. why did you say what you have wrote????? tell me why you don't want to be my friend. THIS IS SOOOO CONFUSING! I'M SO FUSTERATED, BUT CONFUSED! giiglez what's wrong with your friend. it's agrivating me and confusing me to a point that i think i'm gonna to explode. THIS DOESN'T MAKE SENSE!
TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 18 2010 at 2:51 pm
i'm really hoping that was just a joke, i really do.
dark_roses14 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 18 2010 at 12:39 pm
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i honestly think you shouldve written more, it made me think. i wanted to know more about the relationship. and did she end up staying with him?? i'm soooo curious
giiglez SILVER said...
on Nov. 18 2010 at 8:58 am
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you guyz r cr8zy
Tatyana DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 7:33 pm
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ill email u

 

TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 10:12 am
Really one girl is enough for me. =) lol?
TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 10:09 am
=) Tatyana and giiglez, is that true? Please tell me I'm wrong, I love having friends. But there is one girl in my mind, I really don't want another. One girl is one plenty an enough for me. lol?
TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 8:21 am
Just remember I'm here for you. You should know my "creed": never leave a friend behide. I care, please let me help, if I can. If I am pushing it too much please tell me. It's like I said before: I care about my friends a lot. I'm not from Philadelphia, but in a way, it's a brotherly love sort of thing. Although your a girl so I guess it can be a brotherly sisterly love. lol I'm just a caring person. I don't know if I'm repeating myself, it's just I really care.  
TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 7:14 pm
If want to talk about it elsewhere than teenink, then you can email me. In one of my previous messages I did give out my email to you.
TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 7:06 pm
Okay, but you know I'm here for you. I don't wish to nag, I really don't want to. But I will listen if you need to talk to someone. In a way, if you need to lean on a shoulder, I'm gonna be here for you. I care about my friends a lot. You are one of those friends.
Tatyana DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 6:14 pm
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its not anything you did or said

 

Tatyana DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 5:39 pm
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you didnt sound desperate trin trin it really tell you cared ... but
TrinityCreed said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 9:48 am
You can always talk to me. I'm sorry if I sounded desperate. It's just I don't like loosing freinds. To admit this I'm a bit emotional when loosing people in my life. It really hurts me. Well in one of the previous messages, I gave you my email. If you want to, you can email me if you need to talk to someone. I will be here for you when you need it.