love comes with a sacrifice

October 27, 2010
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I was dating this guy for a long time. He wanted to "do it". I refused , so that night he snuck in my room and raped me. Before he left he said"Sometimes love comes with a sacrifice." A few days later I told him to go to the cops,but he refused. That night I snucked in his room and held the gun to him and said."Love comes with a sacrifice." I shot him but he didn't die. His parents came and begged him to tell who did this. But he refused and they said,"Love comes with a sacrifice." A few nights later he came to my house and asked to come in. Of course I refused, so he snuck in. He sat on my bed looked me in thhe eye and said I love you and thats two words I couldnt refuse.





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Tatyana said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 10:16 am
dude...non of my poems has nothing to do with you we cant be friends was based on my friends relationship andbeautiful lie is about my bf
 
music-is-my-life said...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 12:39 pm
i honestly think you shouldve written more, it made me think. i wanted to know more about the relationship. and did she end up staying with him?? i'm soooo curious
 
giiglez replied...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 10:12 am
okaii thanx ill remember  that
 
BrokenInnocence replied...
Nov. 24, 2010 at 5:19 pm
ok i agree here what happened??????? did she stick with him or what? oh and i love the part where she shot him he totaly deserved it :)
 
supermonkey said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 10:07 am

i like this poem alot it is cool just in a weirdly way

 

 
giiglez replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 9:46 am

awwwwwwwwwww thanx

 

 
Tatyana replied...
Nov. 13, 2010 at 1:09 pm
like your name supermonkey...lol
 
Bubblez15 said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 10:04 am
good job yahna wait giiglez i like it
 
giiglez replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 10:07 am
thanx hon u like
 
Bubblez15 replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 7:00 pm
wierdo...giiglez loves ya
 
giiglez replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 9:47 am
shut up BUBBLEZ13 SOOOOOOOOOOH WAIT I MEAN BUBBLEZ15 MY BAD
 
TrinityCreed replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 10:19 am
Giiglez . . . you . . . like . . . me??? :o Or am I readin this wrong?
 
Bubblez15 replied...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 7:16 pm
giiglez have a crush on trin trin 
 
TrinityCreed replied...
Nov. 13, 2010 at 8:51 am
That's okay, I may not know what you look like, but I do bet you are a very pretty girl giiglez.
 
TrinityCreed replied...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 10:09 am
=) Tatyana and giiglez, is that true? Please tell me I'm wrong, I love having friends. But there is one girl in my mind, I really don't want another. One girl is one plenty an enough for me. lol?
 
TrinityCreed replied...
Nov. 17, 2010 at 10:12 am
Really one girl is enough for me. =) lol?
 
TrinityCreed replied...
Nov. 18, 2010 at 2:51 pm
i'm really hoping that was just a joke, i really do.
 
giiglez replied...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 10:24 am

ont like you i really DONT not tryin to be mean taty is just messin okaiii

 

 
TrinityCreed replied...
Nov. 20, 2010 at 10:23 am
oh ok it was just a joke then. why did tatyana do what she did? this is what i'm asking you giiglez, cause if she wants to in-a-way shove me off to the road. why couldn't she just say we'll keep a distance or so? this is what i'm asking you not her, since she doesn't want to talk to me.
 
giiglez said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 9:43 am
please leave your most honest opinoin
 
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