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On Friday morning I look in the mirror. I see a girl in an Aero hoodie and dark was boot cut jeans from the same store. The hoodie is just like the ones all of her friends have, but a different color. The jeans are dark wash and boot cut because that is fashionable, even if the girl would rather wear her faded Old Navys. Her hair is straight, all of its natural curl pressed out between two hot plates.

It takes the girl an hour to straighten her hair, an hour that she would rather spend doing other things, but she does it anyway because its cool, in, fashionable, stylish, and all of the other acceptable adjectives. The girl grabs her name brand tote and heads out the door.

The next day is Saturday. I look in the mirror again. I see a girl in a faded Minnesota Twins T-shirt and Mickey Mouse pajama pants. This is me.

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imrighthereyouknow said...
Jun. 25, 2010 at 6:15 pm:
can totally relate, good piece!
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MissFaber said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 2:55 pm:
**identity crisis**
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stargazer_lillyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 5:22 pm:
i really liked the idea, but you switched between saying "I" then "the girl" then back to "I" again... if you make that consistent, it's a really good piece of writing.
notebookgirl replied...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 7:35 am :
I was trying to make it seem like I was the girl but she was sort of looking at herself from someone else's point of view. thanks for the feedback anyway I will work on it
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dominicana said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 7:58 pm:
Amazing work keep on writing
notebookgirl replied...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 8:35 am :
thanks that means a lot
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missmimmi01 said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 1:19 pm:
yeah a lot of people do what everybody elese does insted of what they want
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