So Much Rage

July 5, 2009
By Anonymous

"And then my heart broke in two." End of my story. End of me. End of the anticipation, anxiety, and the occasional case of butterflies. End of it all. My life was decreasing and I didn't know what to do about it.
Love is a strange thing. It's a dream, to some people. But to most, a living hell. I see no dancing hearts, no passion, no bliss. I see tears falling from my red, warm face; the blood rising to my cheeks as I shy away from it all. Love is more like a car accident. You never expect it, and you think it will be fine. But next thing you know you're in critical condition at your nearest county hospital. I can't look at myself anymore, I cannot. I am hideous. This face I have grown to know so well ponders, burning in my mind. I want to escape this body, this mind. I cannot contain my hatred any longer. As I linger by the piece of glass, obtaining the reflection of this face I know so well, I turn away. My eyes are still stinging, although the tears have faded. My chest is empty as it heaves up and down. No heart remains in my hollow beneaths. I turn away and I have rage. So much rage, inside me.


The author's comments:
sometimes it's hard to put things down on paper in rhyme and misleading phrases. so sometimes you just have to put it the hard way. if it's the true way.

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 3 comments.


on Mar. 28 2010 at 1:52 pm
MoandBrowniegirl SILVER, Toronto, Other
7 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul; dig deep, for every dream preceeds the goal."

Anytime, really. :)

on Mar. 26 2010 at 8:25 am
fatomelette BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 4 comments
thank you, very much :)

on Mar. 9 2010 at 8:07 pm
MoandBrowniegirl SILVER, Toronto, Other
7 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul; dig deep, for every dream preceeds the goal."

This is a lovely description, and a totally novel way of looking at human emotion. Keep it up!


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!