In the Water

May 19, 2009
By Zach Hamer SILVER, Sussex, Wisconsin
Zach Hamer SILVER, Sussex, Wisconsin
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Tumbling through the current I struggle to break the surface. Pieces of me are being left behind in the water. Then, if by some miracle, a young girl pulls me out of the water. My surface is broken and rough, but she doesn’t care. She carefully observes my surface and softly says, “Wow, cool rock.”

The author's comments:
i really like the twist that i put at the end of this 55 word essay

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