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My mirror has seen many people,
Beautiful, happy people.
Stick thin, lovely people.
Then the mirror saw me,
The great mistake.
The mirror had wished to find somebody pretty, to stare at all day long.
Poor mirror, I feel sorry for it.
For the mirror was stuck with me now.
I don’t think my mirror’s very happy. The face reflecting back, is always crying
Poor mirror, why does it have such an upset face?
I wouldn’t have wanted to buy that mirror; its making me upset
because the mirror is now making the girl ugly
the girl itself is so ordinary, but the mirror twists things.
Poor mirror, making her appear so grotesque, poor girl.
I can see the girl much more clearly now,
Poor thing, she’s starving herself to death,
the mirror is going to ruin her one day
So I can understand why she’s so angry with the mirror now.
As I see her thrashing around,
screaming “why will the fat not go?”
I now feel empathy for the girl,
how can nobody notice her?
Any small imperfection on her tiny body is twisted into a horrible form.
The once happy girl, now suffering alone.
Well, not truly alone, at least she has her mirror.
The true cosmetic, the truthful one.
Oh, there is one matter I failed to mention,
the mirror?
Well not to worry, it can no longer cause any harm.
The girl?
Well she hated her reflection so much,
that she finally plucked out the courage.
She slaughtered the mirror,
She destroyed it and shattered the mirror into a thousand, shining, glass shards.
The glass marred into the poor girls defenceless body,
She always thought she had gotten rid of that treacherous mirror,
When she punched it with her own knuckles.
Little did she know, the mirror is always with her
Unknown to her, the shards are still inside of her
failing to ever get out.
The mirror left its mark on her, for she now possesses marred scars,
A constant reminder of her attempted murder.
When really?
All she did was blemish the appearance of the mirror
Because now, all the insides were now combined with her insides, as one.
So only now is she truly alone, All she has is herself
Oh, and the mirror. Poor mirror, stuck with a girl like her for eternity.
Poor girl! Never being rid of the mirror,
If only she had hidden the mirror away, or thrust it into the black lake,
Where she would never be able to find it again,

That’s a shame.
She could have had a chance back then,
but now?
She’s ruined her life.
The mirror ruined her life.
They both have each other now
Till death do US part.




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Ashley said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 4:47 pm:
love this well done!
 
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Andrea said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 4:21 pm:

Well done I hope you are still not suffering anymore from anorexia, I think it is brilliant how you can write such meaningful poems.

I wish you good luck for the future :) 

And also do you mind if I show my friend this poem- she is suffering from anorexia and i'm hoping maybe something like this is what she should read. 

 
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MinaOhh said...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 7:32 pm:
Well we can only be happy most of the time. The other part of the time always is caused by forces within and outside of yourself. Being outspoken by your upsetiness( i know that's not a word..lol) whether it be through drawing, writting a poem or even singing can help you fight through thoes times of not being happy. lol, I love your poem, i hope you don't mind me using it in my article in my school newspaper =)
 
Meliz replied...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 4:29 pm :
thankyou and i would be honoured lol will you tell me if people seem to like it? xx
 
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Veronica :D said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 4:08 pm:
This is so deep and meaningful, but I hope you don't see yourself the way you describe because I'm positive you are not the girl in the mirror and your the pretty one standing there :) mirrors make everybody look bad, you wouldn't know what flaws you have until you see them , so just be happy :)
 
Meliz replied...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 4:27 pm :
thankyou veronica
im trying to be happy, bit of a struggle but i'll get there :)
 
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sislleyyy kkk. said...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 2:42 pm:
this is so sad, and really deep :( it actually made me cry and i dont do that very often! well done on this article and please write more you are very talented. good work meliz.
 
Meliz replied...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 4:28 pm :

thankyou sislleyyy kkk

:)

 
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Meliz said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 7:09 am:
i meant thankyou to
xcrayolaxstormx   and
iluvnacho
 
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Meliz said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 7:07 am:
thankyou :)
 
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rosie ward said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 9:40 am:

mel, this is weird. you need some help I think.... just be MEL again. pleaseeeeee.

 

 
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Andyskinnyyy said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 9:38 am:
i have never seen such a deep, meaningful poem. although i am slightly disturbed by this and i think you should seek medical advice or maybe go to an eating Disorder clinic it is amazing. The choice of words seem very personal
 
Meliz replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 7:07 am :
thanks but i dont need to go to somewhere like that
 
MinaOhh replied...
Sept. 27, 2010 at 7:35 pm :
I totally understand you, and you don't need help, just keep writting. Fuel ppl with ideas and talent that they need
 
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MushBuch11 said...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 7:11 am:

OMG its so so SAD I WANT TO CRY !!!!  seriously need help !! <3 XOXO

 
Meliz replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 7:07 am :
how do i need help?
 
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PIPS. said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 9:32 am:
i think this is a very deep poem,,, are you thin? or anorexic?? sounds like it is a personal account of your daily struggles with the one and only, MIRROR!!!!!
 
Meliz replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 5:00 am :

is this megan?

or lydia?

 
PIPS. replied...
Jul. 8, 2010 at 5:20 am :

no?

 my name is angelina, i am from california

 
Meliz replied...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 7:06 am :
look, i know its either one of you and then you showed rosie, thanks a lot, real mature. you know it was supposed to be private- well i at least didnt want any of my mates reading this and i know its you because u wrote this 20 mins after i wrote it when u were both together on the computer keeping the screen away from me. 
 
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