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the day my dad left.....

January 17, 2013
By youngluni BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
youngluni BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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ivy: Bethany! Gabriel is leaving to war soon! come down to say goodbye
bethany: im coming sister. why cant he stay with us? i dont want him to leave!
ivy: he has to go, he promised our father he would. he can not break a promise to our father. besides he will be back.
bethany: but what if he doesnt survive?!?! you know i will be upset!
ivy: hell be back just you wait. he wont have a single mark on him. i garuntee it. plus like our father said, think positive.
bethany: o-ok..........
gabriel: well ill be back. i promise. and please do not cry. dont worry about me i will be fine.
bethany: promise? promise me you will not get hurt? promise you will not die , but live?
gabriel: beth, i promise. and a promise is a promise.
MONTHS LATER
ivy: oh my god! bethany look who is finally back!!!
bethany: wait a minute you are not saying gabriel is back right?
ivy: beth..... he is right here!
bethany: gabriel! do you know how much i missed you? and y-you survived!
gabriel: i told you already beth, a promise is a promise........
bethany: i missed you so much!


The author's comments:
what inspired me was how little kids have parents that go to the army and days later they come back, and the children have a suprised look on their face

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