Endless Darkness

April 16, 2012
By Saphy BRONZE, Hollywood, California
Saphy BRONZE, Hollywood, California
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never forget to smile.


It’s been 17 years and all I’ve done is wait, wait for you here in the darkness. Do you even remember me? Have you even thought of me since then? When…WHEN…will you come back? I don’t think I can wait any longer. All I want is to lash out, but I can’t, because you have the key, the one key that can unlock me and save me from this endless darkness.



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Lacer GOLD said...
on May. 9 2012 at 10:40 pm
Lacer GOLD, Highland Village, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
The thing about philosophy is that it often runs dry when thought of so shallowly.

It's obviously metaphorical, but the problem is that it's too short :/

I think that if you wanted to, you could turn this into an actual short story, and maintain its metaphor. Other than that, it's cheesy, but in a delightful way!


on May. 9 2012 at 10:19 pm
the artical is very misterious and i litterly frowned that i could scroll down and read more!

on May. 9 2012 at 5:02 pm
mammothfrk PLATINUM, Mammoth Lakes, California
21 articles 25 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is your life, are you who you want to be?

Its good, kept me curious. 

on May. 8 2012 at 11:02 pm
Contemplator SILVER, Lake Park, Minnesota
5 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is a rainbow in your mouth! Open it up and show the world.
This is just like ice cream without the cream.
I'm as stiff as a dried out twig in the middle of winter.
Who lit the forest fire; the match, or the man holding the match?

It made me curious. That means its good.

on May. 8 2012 at 11:24 am
Lexie_Lynn1995@yahoo.com, St. George, South Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Dont let your self fall, because there are loads who would love to see it happen.

This is pretty good:)

SGNox SILVER said...
on May. 7 2012 at 8:13 pm
SGNox SILVER, Timberlake, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
'The stars are always there, but we miss them in the dirt and clouds and we miss them in the storms. Tell them to remember hope. We have Hope.' - Renee Yohe

This is wonderfully written. It has me wondering what exactly happened in the situation.

If you have any more work relating to this, I'd love to read it!


LuvChris13 said...
on May. 6 2012 at 5:46 pm
LuvChris13, Bakersfield, California
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Wow this is beautifully written. Really relatable. =) 

Jlove SILVER said...
on May. 6 2012 at 10:49 am
Jlove SILVER, Albany, Georgia
5 articles 0 photos 9 comments
I really like this you should check out mine called " Dear Darkness" you'd love it :) so check it out

i5abella GOLD said...
on May. 2 2012 at 10:32 pm
i5abella GOLD, Winnipeg, Other
11 articles 2 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
being strong is about picking yourself up and dusting your self off so that you can help a friend when they fall.

wow really discriptive and a captivting idea of lose and love and rememberince; i think most people can relate well to this; short and sweat phrase.

on May. 2 2012 at 6:12 pm
chloasaurusrexXD BRONZE, Northampton, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
We're all a little weird, and life's a little weird, and when we find someone who's weirdness is compatable with ours, we join with them and fall into mutual weirdness, and call it love

wow. I can totally relate to this. It's really good.

on May. 2 2012 at 7:46 am
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

I LOVE the part where you said,

"... you have the key, the one key that can unlock me and save me from this endless darkness"

:)


Saphy BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2012 at 11:44 am
Saphy BRONZE, Hollywood, California
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never forget to smile.

thanks so much!

on Apr. 22 2012 at 10:08 am
C.K.Snow SILVER, Morden, Other
6 articles 10 photos 73 comments

This is great! I can really relate to this! Good job!

Could you check out my work? Thanks!


on Apr. 21 2012 at 11:36 pm
curlygurlray GOLD, Visalia, California
18 articles 1 photo 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
you have the life you let yourself take.

i think is its great because everyone has that one person in life where this fits their description to us

on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:25 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland
forever alone

I love this becauseit easy to relate to

Saphy BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 5:40 pm
Saphy BRONZE, Hollywood, California
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never forget to smile.

I totally agree!

on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:12 am
bearsfan654 SILVER, Elmhurst, Illinois
7 articles 8 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Feb 20, 1962, The USA launches John Glenn into Earth orbit. Something America could do fifty years ago.... but not today." - Neil deGrasse Tyson

Can you give feedback on "A Race Through Space?"

on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:11 am
bearsfan654 SILVER, Elmhurst, Illinois
7 articles 8 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Feb 20, 1962, The USA launches John Glenn into Earth orbit. Something America could do fifty years ago.... but not today." - Neil deGrasse Tyson

Great job! I loved the imagery and the message of this fictional work. 

on Apr. 18 2012 at 8:48 pm
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
God is God and I am not
I can only see a part
Of this picture he's painting
God is God and I am man
I will never understand
Because only God is God

Hey, this is great. Writing is a great way to express some of the emotions that you would normally try to hide isn't it? Keep it up! :)

DanielM. said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 6:04 pm
Wow that was really good. I really like the title it really caught my eye. Great Job and keep on writing!


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