is it better to let go?

A dirty future, in her past.
They dare and try to make this last.
She's turned on to the dark side,
He's on the blind side.
Me, I'm on the undecided side.
But, which one is the right side?

A messed up life you hide behind you eyes,
Their holding back so much.
Does this mean you gave up?
Are you giving up?

I also see fear in your glare.
What are you afraid of?
Is it me?
Is it her?

Can you regain the strength to find love someday once again?
Did you loose control?

He rearranges her ways.
What have you become?
Please don't tell me WE are falling in love.
I really hope not, because I have a fear.
I'm afraid to fall and get hurt.
Will I get back up?

You only get one chance to live.
He told me to hold on, for what we have is different.
He said to me "don't go, I need you."

He had too many issues with her. Was it her fault? Was it his?
But as much as I don't want to,
I know I have to, let go...
What is love? Is it goodbye?





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B14ck14b31 said...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 5:55 pm
Welcome and about my work--Ehh I wouldn't guarantee it will be good as your's  but I am working on it. :) Hopeing to see more great work of yours.
 
XxTickleM3EmoxX This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 1:54 pm
thanks! i appriciate it(: ill be looking forward to your work! (; its just soo exciting to see a new comment or new raiting! :D
 
XxTickleM3EmoxX This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 10:27 am
did i mention this is my first time on teen ink??
 
B14ck14b31 replied...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 1:37 pm
I am new here myself I am planning to update my work soon too. But for now your article is quite understanding. Its a good start for beginners. :)
 
Pinkypink541 said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 1:06 pm
WOW! That's all I have to say.
 
XxEmotionalLov3xX This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 1:17 pm
lol good wow or... ? any ways thanks no matter what :)
 
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