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Six Uneven Stairs This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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They are the only ones that trip me. I am the only one who cleans them. Six uneven stairs with uneven boards and splintering sides. Six that are out of place but fit in. Six stairs worn smooth by years of treading shoes. From the window I can see them, but my mother says to stop staring.

Their memories are long. They have felt three generations of feet walking over them. They stay put and go far and watch noiselessly with their inconspicuous staring and silent laughter. This is how they live.

If one cracked under pressure, the others would surely bend like fingers on a piano, each following the last. Live, live, live, stairs whisper as I pass over. They love.

When I am too alone and too uneven to keep living, when I am a drop of salt in the ocean, then I walk over the stairs. When there is nowhere else to walk on the lane. Six that stay in spite of the rain. Six that are above and remain above. For their only purpose is to see and see.

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ElkieLionThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 19 at 10:20 am:
Brilliant :)
 
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Krikette This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 4:04 pm:
I really, really like this. The simplicity yet depth is wonderful. I read it a couple times, and my appreciation for it only grew. Well done!
 
Krikette This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 4:05 pm :

Favorite line :)

"If one cracked under pressure, the others would surely bend like fingers on a piano, each following the last."

 
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ritabelle511 said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 10:50 pm:
I absolutely loved this piece - fantastic job! Beautifully written.
 
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Neautique132 said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 11:50 am:
This is so poetic, such an intimate piece. I love it!
 
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remembermeplzThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 6:11 pm:
awhmahzing!
 
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LeannLOVESya This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 3:10 pm:
Beautiful in the best sense. :) You have a simplistic loveliness to your style of writing.... I adore it! It is very deep as well, keep writing.    P.S.- I'm jealous. And I love when you say that your mom says to quit staring. It gave me absolute chills.
 
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amberglow13 said...
Oct. 21, 2010 at 12:49 pm:
Have you read "The House on Mango Street"? Because this seems like a ripoff of the chapter about the four skinny trees.
 
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Loversinjapan said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 6:58 pm:
Very nice. It kind of has multiple meanings. Like you want the readers to finish the writing. Great job.
 
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kielymarie said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 7:01 pm:
Beautiful.
 
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inspir3d This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 1:17 pm:

hey have you ever read House on Mango Street? because this seems like a very similar spin off of Esperanza's narration @ the four trees. especially the last line--almost identical.

but this is beautiful to read!! keep writing!

 
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aslanrox430 said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 3:42 pm:
Wow. That was... wow. amazing, really good and... wow
 
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a.m.f said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 2:40 pm:

Wow! I like this! It's amazing.  Keep on writing.  If you have time, please check out my story, Scratching Stones.

 

 
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horse95loverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 24, 2010 at 5:42 pm:
this is awesome! you have real talent - write more please!!!
 
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irrara12 said...
May 24, 2010 at 5:02 pm:
this is amazing
 
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heart of spirit said...
May 10, 2010 at 6:00 pm:
m at loss for words. it was just so........ meaningful i guess is the word.
 
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Dee123 said...
May 4, 2010 at 9:48 am:
I am not sure i understand this but it was very intreisting
 
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CatCaveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 6:33 pm:
Very beautiful.
 
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TheseBrownEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 4:33 pm:
this is certainly amazing! very good! Congrats on getting into the mag.
 
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beautiful*downfallThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 12:50 pm:
That last line...made me think there was more to this than meets the eye. Like poetry, it has meanings hidden to the rest of the world. Or... maybe it's just about stairs :p
 
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sleeplessdreamer said...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 7:58 am:
It had the flow of a poem but I liked that it wasn't. The metaphors were great. Great job!
 
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montana said...
Dec. 21, 2009 at 11:18 am:
Wonderfall. uhh btw can u check out my work and uhh comment on it? u are appreciated.
 
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AnImE_LoVeR54 said...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 7:26 pm:
ThIs Is A VeRy GoOd StOrY, LoVe It ToO!
KeEp It Up WItH ThE GoOd WoRk...
 
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easy-as-123-ABC said...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 11:42 am:
well done! the metaphor is very good and the piece had a poetic flow to it
 
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bookworm266 said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 6:37 pm:
i think it was beatuful i really loved it
 
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Like*Whoa!!! This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 13, 2009 at 2:33 am:
this is beautifully written, i like that it isnt a poem because then you have the choice of whether or not to think of it as poetic. (i did) its also a reallyy good metaphor:) keep writing! ohh and check out some of my stuff <3
 
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YeseniaG said...
Apr. 1, 2009 at 11:13 pm:
I suppose you'd have to somewhat imaginative to understand this, which I definitely did and loved it. For those that didn't understand, take it for what it means and not for what it says.
 
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courtney1215 said...
Mar. 15, 2009 at 3:09 am:
i get this!!! the stairs are just a metaphor... this has nothing to do with stairs does it?? no!!! ha i love this cause once i got to the second paraghrph it made sense. it just has a different meaning for whoever reads this
 
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ashwee said...
Jan. 8, 2009 at 2:03 pm:
I don't get it.
 
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sydka said...
Dec. 24, 2008 at 6:39 am:
There were a few people who said they didn't understand it... How CAN'T you! I guess your writing is meaningful for different people in different ways. I liked it because there are so many ways to apply this to life
 
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Someadvice1234 said...
Nov. 23, 2008 at 4:18 pm:
I'm sorry but I feel this would work better as a poem.
 
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IMS said...
Nov. 5, 2008 at 12:46 am:
I don't mean to get you upset but I don't really fully understand the story.
 
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katiekeys said...
Oct. 23, 2008 at 8:07 pm:
wonderfully written. thoughtful diction and depth. i liked the first paragraph the best. i'm glad i gave in to my curiosity about the title and read the actual piece. excellent.
 
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tonganboss said...
Oct. 14, 2008 at 4:47 pm:
i really like this.. i dont know why i juss liked it...lol
good job
 
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shelbylove said...
Oct. 14, 2008 at 4:43 pm:
I absolutly loved this. Such deep meaning and beautifully written. Great job. (:
 
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meggiepones said...
Oct. 10, 2008 at 4:58 pm:
I really liked this! It had so much meaning. Keep up the amazing job:)
 
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shesaidsoo said...
Sept. 18, 2008 at 9:13 pm:
i love this very much.. this story is a wap of metaphors.. i took it as the person in the story using the stairs as a way to get them through the day beacause the stairs symbolized struggle.. and getting through it at that
 
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Tweedle Dee said...
Sept. 6, 2008 at 6:02 pm:
AWESOME!!! it really makes you think and see that no one's perect.
 
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twilightony said...
Aug. 28, 2008 at 7:39 pm:
Very, very beautiful and poetic. A very deep message; the writing is amazing.
 
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stargal77 said...
Aug. 26, 2008 at 12:28 am:
beautiful...i enjoyed every word
 
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kelly789 said...
Aug. 19, 2008 at 6:37 pm:
i dont get it
 
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DevvyGirl said...
Aug. 19, 2008 at 4:04 am:
I love this story. It makes readers open themselves up to see what their six uneven stairs are. It is amazing and so gracefull.
 
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Alerat said...
Aug. 16, 2008 at 4:17 am:
This is so beautiful. I enjoyed each time I read it.
 
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