abandoned beginning #1

January 31, 2010
The light's hitting the water in this eerie, beckoning way. It laps one step closer to my toes, creeps towards, covers them and pulls back. Then moves onto my ankles, teasing. They move as one, the playful glimmer and liquid. Thoughts ooze in and out in perfect rhythm with the water, washing over and drawing away, making me so crazy that I even start to think to myself, in senseless, rapid conversation.
“Im heading out.”
“I don't know. Do I care?”
“I think you do. “

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HaHmAh12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 7, 2010 at 8:36 pm
oh hey! i accidentally published my work anonymously but in the event you want to check out stuff i post later on...i am anonymous, toledo, OH haha
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