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Scribbles on the chalkboard. That’s all that was really there, some shapes probably, numbers and some math symbols. He knew them all – not like it was a foreign language. It was just kind of pointless. It wasn’t even a chalkboard; it was a whiteboard. But chalkboards were more poetic. It flowed better, anyway. He let that thought swirl around his mind for a bit. Sort of like the mysterious liquid they gave you instead of wine on Thanksgiving when you were a kid.

Well not really, especially since he knew what the liquid was (sparkling cider) and thoughts don’t swirl. At least they didn’t for him. They just hung there, more like old rusty thumbtacks that hold up papers for a few days then pop out of the corkboard. Yeah, sort of like that. He let his thoughts drift. Considering they were rusty thumbtacks that were bound to pop anyway, he sort of let them hang for a bit then sink away somewhere. Oblivion perhaps.

Suddenly a hand touched his shoulder, he was half pulled out of his thoughts, staring at the whiteboard; he realized he hadn’t blinked in far too long. His eyes were watering.

“Zack, I would appreciate it if you’d pay attention,” the owner of the hand hissed. Oh yeah. Math. That’s right. Some variation of some useless formula was what the symbols and scribbles on the whiteboard were. He nodded, slightly, as if he didn’t really mean it. Because he didn’t mean it at all.

His mind was elsewhere, preoccupied with words, not numbers. Although he now seemed enraptured by the strange markings on the board, he didn’t actually care. He mentally laughed at his own thoughts, if he laughed in the physical sense, people would stare at him, probably snicker behind his back at some untold joke. Again, not that he cared, it was just kind of annoying, you know? No, you probably don’t.

He let his mind make the popping of rusty thumbtacks its priority. Did they make a sound? He’d have to figure it out, do some sort of scientific report on it or something. Win a Nobel Prize for it. What a clever little boy. No more snickering behind his back. He laughed, this time physically. Luckily the sound was drowned out by the fourth bell, the one that meant lunch. He snagged his iPod from his messenger bag and trotted, yeah, like a horse, off to the lunch room.

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aduke9This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 6 at 12:39 am:
I loved it! You are a wonderful writer.
 
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FreedomIsMyVirtueThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 14 at 2:03 am:
I really like this piece and I think this is beautifully written. Although I kind of like Math, I like this article too. Good job!
 
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all.of.the.colors. said...
Mar. 1 at 3:41 pm:
The personality of character shines quite nicely in your story. :) Excellent work. 
 
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Lillie M. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 8 at 11:06 am:
You really get a sense of who the character is from this piece, without you really having to say much at all. This is amazing.
 
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thebrighterpartsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 8 at 7:42 am:
At first I felt like the way it was written was a little strange, but when I reached the end it fit precisely. And just having been in a droning, boring math class in which I was drifting in and out of attentiveness, it is very fitting indeed.
 
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Jamers_smileThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 17 at 2:26 pm:
the way this was written... it's just too good for words. the tone is completely perfect and you can totally understand how uninterested he is in math. I love it. Simply love it. The character has so much depth to him in such a little space.
 
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SanGes said...
Jan. 7 at 8:36 am:
I'm going to see chalkboards and whiteboards from a different perspective now! U made them seem more interesting.
 
Bat-MobileThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 17 at 4:41 am :
I love the way this is written, so airy and lackadaisical. Very much like one would feel in a boring math class.
 
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Meaghan_EliseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 5:52 pm:
You're really an amazing author(: Your details and descriptiveness keep it very interesting. You write very well. I like it:D
 
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Micky21098This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 2:44 pm:
AMAZING!!! I love the way the character thinks, kind of like the way i do, but slightly different. Great job and i really love this story!
 
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lilirose said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 8:45 am:
This is really good work. Well done, I liked it a lot :)
 
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EmiriThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 16, 2011 at 10:02 am:
This shows honesty in teh things that we usually can't describe, so we don't. You know what I mean? I like it, anyhow.
 
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JappyalldayeverydayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 8:36 pm:
You have developed a really good character and you write so well! Please add a plot? Not trying to be mean, I just think it would be amazing with one.
 
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CaeCae97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 9:35 pm:
I really like the sarcasm, also, and have felt like this at times. Keep writing!
 
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Gingersnap777This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 8:46 am:
I really enjoyed the cynic/sarcastic attitude, I thought you brought that across very well, creating an airtight narration.  Your style is also very artistically executed; the "stream of consciousness" feel really drew me right into the mind of the narrator.  Great job!
 
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wisher14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 29, 2011 at 3:56 pm:
I can definately relate to this article!  I am like this all of the time, actually, and its really cool to read a piece i can relate so much to since there is not many people who get this lost in thought and can understand what it's like.  I totally got what the character was going through and truely loved it!
 
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Mickey_DThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 29, 2011 at 2:35 pm:

When I read this, I thought of a second place prize dog that knows plenty of tricks, but can't feed itself or breathe.

 

I get the poetry, but I don't see the relevance, nor the meaning.

 
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heather_marieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 29, 2011 at 12:38 pm:
I love the way you desribed what he was thinking in the way most of us think. really good details a fav of mine!
 
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mercebeinyata said...
Sept. 7, 2011 at 9:45 pm:

I kind of enjoyed the blissful state that the boy was somewhat in. Even though I cannot relate to daydreaming in math class, I understand the pondering mentality that the boy is experiencng.

By the way, I am starting this new game called Big Words. You start by reading my short story called "Purple-face Tom" (sorry to latently advertise, but it gets better). Once you read my short story, you post one comment using a fancy word. Just put the fancy word that you use in bold so tha... (more »)

 
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Kirsten L. said...
Sept. 7, 2011 at 7:59 pm:
I really like the character, and I understand how he feels about math. It's hard not to daydream in that class... XD
 
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zadiekatie23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 7, 2011 at 5:46 pm:
Hey, this was a great article; I loved reading it because I could connect to the absentminded thoughts that were at the same time deep and focused. Great job, once again, I enjoyed reading this!
 
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Brin11This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 7, 2011 at 4:32 pm:
I agree, there were so many contradictions and metaphors it made it seem like you were actually looking into his thoughts. I like the way he thinks- kind of absent  minded and philisophical all at the same time.
 
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awesomeaugustThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 1:14 pm:
your style is strong! and I love the fact that you've created a whole persona in this character...you shoud make something longer out of this!
 
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Lola_BlackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 12:40 pm:
Nice! Very good descriptions of what goes on in the character's head! And as for the second to last paragraph, yes I do know!
 
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HarebelleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 12:18 pm:
You have a really great voice! I like how you describe the character's mind wandering to all sorts of random things!
 
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LifeWriteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 6:45 pm:
I love this! The writing was great--it has this rhythm, this voice--and that is just how I feel in math!!!
 
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TAR11This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 4:02 pm:
Cool story please check out mine, Sean Flynn, if you get the chance thanks! 
 
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Randum said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 2:05 pm:
Really good. Thats how I feel in math.
 
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blueandorangeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 3:07 pm:
Very Good!
 
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Curly_SueThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 7:31 pm:
Cute. Awesome. Really liked it. Really interesting. Something anyone can connect with. Especially me. Math is rather boring. At least I think so. Great article. Great read. (And my thoughts do swirl lol)
 
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DisicpleofChristandJesusEnthusiastThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 9:06 am:
OH MY GOSH! This is AMAZING! This is my FAVORITE Piece EVER on Teenink! GREAT JOB!!
 
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Krikette This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 12:31 am:

VERY WELL DONE! FUNNY, ORIGINAL, WITTY. I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO THE NARRATOR. AT SOME POINTS IT WAS A BIT HARD TO FOLLOW BUT THAT WAS BECAUSE IT WAS A STREAM OF CONSCIOUSNESS SO IT FIT WITH THE STORY.

(CAPS NOT INTENDED. TECHNICAL MALFUNCTION. SORRY!)

 
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Aamna said...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 4:06 pm:
I really enjoyed this piece. the idea of the thumbtacks is genius!! I tottally understand this person's dislike for math :)  please check out my story called Precarious pursuit
 
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RockGirl182This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 1:08 pm:
Really good, today i think i fell asleep in math soo i really liked this. good job, nice word choice :)
 
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InvisibleNerdGirl said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 10:25 pm:
This is awesome! :D I was feeling EXACTLY like this in math class today. Only my thoughts aren't really like thumbtacks, they're more like clouds or perhaps birds... or maybe cars in those commercials where the fine print reads "CLOSED COURSE. DO NOT ATTEMPT..."
 
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skyblue95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 12:20 pm:
I loved your use of imagery in this! You're an awesome writer, and I wish I could be that good. Could you check out some of my stuff please? Thanks and keep writing!
 
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WritesforJesus said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 9:34 pm:
I love this,I think a lot of people on here can relate to it considering Math and English/writing are opposite sides of the brain lol Great job!
 
Artsygirl replied...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 9:01 am :
Sounds like me. Whenever I try to do math, I always end up wanting to write instead!
 
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yourworstnightmareThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 8:36 pm:

I could relate to this pretty well...except I actually like math class so I try not to space out there. I'd be spacing out in history or geography. But still, amazing job!

Keep writing! <3

 
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Detective-C said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 12:59 pm:
Wow. It leaves me sort of speechless. If I were to write about the exact same thing it wouldn't have been so lenghty or interesting. You have real talent, I wish I could write like you
 
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Nerys D. said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 4:48 pm:
I love the way he describes his thoughts. It gives a great image!
 
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MgymnastThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 1:00 am:
This is very relatable and very well written!! Also, if you get the chance could you check out some of my poetry such as A Mirror Image and The sinner confession (and comment and rate them????) it would be greatly appreciated! THANKS! And keep writing because your amazing at it! :)
 
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teeninkwriter said...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 11:40 pm:
awesome job! reminds me of myself in math class
 
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zhlenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 7:21 pm:
thats so good!!!
 
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Iluvvampirediaries said...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 5:55 pm:
Hello again!!! If you have time can you look at my work?
 
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Iluvvampirediaries said...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 5:54 pm:
What's up girl? Nice job... I do that all the time in algebra. Waiting desprately for the bell to ring...
 
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Saponaceous said...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 5:01 pm:
Nice--I like the thoughts on how the contents of the mind can work with so many metaphors and similes. The mind is difficult, yet easy, to typify.
 
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writerinfinity said...
Jan. 8, 2011 at 4:12 pm:
      Good job.
 
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KrystalTThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 26, 2010 at 1:54 pm:
Reminds me of myself
 
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DreamingOutLoudThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 25, 2010 at 10:45 am:
The definition of daydreaming. =) Good work.
 
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