May 10, 2009
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most think it's red but it's blue, it is dry and bitter in your mouth, it feels icy cold right down to the bone though it smells like thick smoky steam and sounds like shrill hateful shouts but oddly enough it looks painful and to some it is to be angry at your near and dear but that's just the way nature works for after anger come fear and hurt.

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KK2013 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 8:44 am
Hmmm, very interesting way to look at emotions..... and that is one LOOOONG sentence.
#1Swimmer said...
May 4, 2010 at 3:42 pm
couldn't have said it any better.
EllieK. replied...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 10:51 am
wow. That was really good and captured the emotion wonderfully and beautifully.
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