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Dangerous Game

“Why should I trust you?” She screamed in a whisper.

“Because you won’t get him back. He never gave her back to me…” He replied morosely, eyes downcast.

Ginnie staggered back a step. “What the hell is that supposed to mean?” She demanded, knowing full well the reason behind his words.

“He never let my wife go. He killed her and didn’t tell me. I kept trying to get her back, I did everything he asked, followed his instructions to the letter.”

“How do you know it’s a him?” She accused. “How do you know it’s anyone at all?”

“There’s always someone. I just assumed you had some beau…” Liam answered.

She stood stiffly, staring intently at Liam. She could hear the soft clinking of the links of his handcuffs as he adjusted and readjusted, trying to find a position to relieve the burning sensation of the cuffs chafing against the skin on his wrists. There was a sizeable goose egg on the side of his head where Ginnie’d knocked him out last night. The area on his face where his nose sat was caked with dried blood and there was an ugly bruise along his cheekbone. Ginnie flexed her fingers. She could feel the cracked skin from punching the dirt bag currently under her careful scrutiny.

“There’s always someone…” He repeated, more to himself this time, eyes glazing over as they stared unseeingly into space.

Making a sudden decision, Ginnie strode around the back of Liam’s chair. She pulled the small, sliver key out of her jeans pocket and slid it into the small lock of the handcuffs. With a click, the cuffs fell open. Ginnie heard the slight sigh of relief as Liam pulled his hands to rest on his lap in front of him. His shoulders would be sore after hours in his handcuffed position. She could see him rubbing his forearms, coaxing the blood back into his fingertips.

For another second, she watched Liam from behind. Then she walked back in front of him. She thrust her hands out, grabbing his collar. With an almighty pull, she hoisted him from his seat, pivoted, and slammed him against the wall. She watched him gasp as the tears sprang up, the eyes went blank and rolled back, and the jaw went slack. She’d knocked the wind out of him, judging from the way he was sucking in air.

“You listen to me, Liam,” she started, her voice dangerously low, “I don’t trust you. Not even as far as I can throw you. I think you’re among the most undeserving filth on the face of this earth.”

“Then why am I still alive?” he gasped.

Growling, Ginnie pulled him back and threw him into the wall again. “Dammit, you keep your mouth shut unless I say otherwise, understand?” Ginnie asked, even though it was rhetorical. She removed one hand from his collar and pulled her gun out of the holster on her hip, shoving it against Liam’s temple. “Now. I’m willing to give you a chance because neither one of us has any options.”

Liam seemed to relax a little.

“But,” Ginnie added, making him tense up once more, “if you screw it up…”

Pausing her speech, Ginnie squeezed the trigger on her gun. Click. Liam flinched.

“I don’t think I have to tell you the next time I do that, the gun will be loaded.”

Liam shook his head. Ginnie dropped him and holstered her gun. She exhaled through her nose and slowly let him slide down to the ground. Ginnie checked her watch. It’d been too long. Almost two hours since she’d come in. Playing cat and mouse took too much time, and she was starting to get sick of games anyway. But Liam didn’t seem to know that.

“So who’d he take?”

“What?” Ginnie snapped.

“Who’s so damn important to you that you’d risk your life, and mine?”

Ginnie dropped her head and looked away.

“My father.”

A harsh laugh issued from Liam, making Ginnie jump.

“You honestly think that he’s let your father, of all people, live? You’re more naïve than I thought. He’s no more alive than my wife is,” he finished bitterly.

“Want a bet?” Ginnie asked darkly.




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A.Dreamer said...
Aug. 7, 2010 at 9:27 am:
I like Ginnie's personality! :) You made it so clear. And that's a great beginning to a story, I hope you'll write more of this!
 
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chocolateharp said...
Aug. 7, 2010 at 9:15 am:
Brilliant! This is honestly one of the best fiction pieces I've seen on here. Is this part of a book, perhaps? I'll be looking out for it at Barnes and Noble. :D
 
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ImaginedangerousThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 10:30 am:
I like the last line- her determination is amazing.
 
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LilDog14 said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 8:24 am:
That was a great story, best story I've read yet.
 
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singergurl12 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 2:25 pm:
this is really good! i love how Ginnie can definately hold up against anyone... if you made a book out of it, she seems like the type of girl teenagers would want to imitate. back up to 15/10!
 
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PeaceLovePiggy said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 8:00 pm:
Woah. That was great. I don't have any constructive criticism because it was PERFECT!
 
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cantfindascreename said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 6:52 pm:
Oh my goodness, i was so sad when it ended! Very captivating story, and I only have to say that i wish it had gone on longer! Great job!
 
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Babycakes56 said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 9:55 pm:
loved it!! completely caught my interest with the first line! I do love how you made Ginnie completely awesome and able to hold her own!
 
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lusis said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 2:50 pm:

Oooh. This is so so so good. You had me hooked the very first line, with your paradox "she screamed in a whisper." And I just love your characters. Ginnie seems like she can definitely hold her own, not some damsel in distress. I love that she's putting her life on the line for her father, and not for a lover.

And Liam is so mysterious. He's obviously been wronged in the past, but he's the one sitting there handcuffed. I'd love to know more about his past.

I see one or two typos... (more »)

 
iDogrocker replied...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 6:00 pm :
Thank you! I appreciate the compliments :) It's always nice to find out someone enjoys your writing.
 
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