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Gun shot. . . Yet another is gone

Gun shot
Yet another is gone
Whose to say what went wrong ?
When that trigger was pulled and aimed at him
Life is gone like a tree that's lost its stem .
Gun shot
Yet another is gone
Alive now . . But not for long
Being chased after by the opposite color
To protect his red or blue brother .
Gun shot
Yet another is gone
Does it make you feel qood to do the wrong ?
To kill another mans soul
To pull the trigger and place a whole . .
Right through his body and call it a day
For him to struggle & have nothing more to say ?
But still whose to say what went wrong ?
When there was a Gun shot & Yet another was gone .




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Zazawish777 said...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 8:45 pm:
Ireally enjoyed that! i thought it was great! please comment and rate mine thanks!
 
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Poetry4EverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 10:44 am:
WOW. That was really amazing. I loved it. I know that my comments don't really matter since I am just starting poetry again, but I want you to know that I love your work. It is really deep and amazing. I'm goona post some new poems hopefully soon so come chack 'em out soon...... Thanx
 
iWriteToExpressThouqhts replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 11:53 am :
thanks :] , trust me your comments mean a lot ! I'll check your stuff when it comes out
 
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yellowflower said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 4:42 pm:
very good!
 
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xovanillatwilightxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 9, 2010 at 6:14 pm:
very powerful, with just a few grammar errors but nothing big :) it really makes you think about the impact of violence on not just the world, but individuals. great work!
 
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RFrocker23 said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 8:51 am:
That was intense.
 
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