Gun shot. . . Yet another is gone

June 17, 2010
By ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥


Gun shot
Yet another is gone
Whose to say what went wrong ?
When that trigger was pulled and aimed at him
Life is gone like a tree that's lost its stem .
Gun shot
Yet another is gone
Alive now . . But not for long
Being chased after by the opposite color
To protect his red or blue brother .
Gun shot
Yet another is gone
Does it make you feel qood to do the wrong ?
To kill another mans soul
To pull the trigger and place a whole . .
Right through his body and call it a day
For him to struggle & have nothing more to say ?
But still whose to say what went wrong ?
When there was a Gun shot & Yet another was gone .



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on Jul. 9 2014 at 3:09 pm
HafsaAhmed PLATINUM, Karachi, Other
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I don't believe in angry arguments , I believe in silent revenge.

Revenge doesn't merely means hurting others, it sometimes mean being a better person than you were yesterday.

I really like it. I think its quite meaningful 

on Aug. 23 2010 at 8:45 pm
Zazawish777 GOLD, KC, MO, Missouri
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life isn't passing me by, it's trying to run me over!

Ireally enjoyed that! i thought it was great! please comment and rate mine thanks!

on Aug. 1 2010 at 11:53 am
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

thanks :] , trust me your comments mean a lot ! I'll check your stuff when it comes out

on Aug. 1 2010 at 10:44 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
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Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

WOW. That was really amazing. I loved it. I know that my comments don't really matter since I am just starting poetry again, but I want you to know that I love your work. It is really deep and amazing. I'm goona post some new poems hopefully soon so come chack 'em out soon...... Thanx

on Jul. 18 2010 at 4:42 pm
yellowflower SILVER, Basking Ridge, New Jersey
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very good!

on Jul. 9 2010 at 6:14 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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very powerful, with just a few grammar errors but nothing big :) it really makes you think about the impact of violence on not just the world, but individuals. great work!

on Jul. 4 2010 at 8:51 am
RFrocker23 PLATINUM, Ballwin, Missouri
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"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."

That was intense.




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