Devil'z Trip

As I place one foot in front of the other I draw a deep breath walking over the corpses of my family and friends into the waiting arms of death he holds the keys to his heart and mine in one hand and a gun in the other. It’z smoking I look away from the evil grin and glowing red eyes and follow his stare to see Adam falling to the ground. I scream a Furious Bloodthirsty defiant screech, grab the gun from his hand shoot him then myself in the heart. As I am falling to the ground next to Adam I wonder were Eddie and Jake are they hadn’t been killed yet. Just before I hit the floor strong hands catch me, It was Eddie and Jake was lifting Adam over his shoulder as Eddie stands me right side up, Stares at the hole in my chest. Just as Jake pushes Eddie out of the way pulls the Pocket Knife that I alwayz carry, cuts his wrist and holds it to my mouth. Wen I’m done turning I turn over and bite Adam just in time, then Eddie for he is not one of us yet. Finally I turn to death, I bites hit wrist and wit for his transformation to be completed. I will torture him for hurting all my loved ones.





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Fallen55 said...
Mar. 26, 2010 at 11:29 am
really good:) i love you polar bear<3
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 12:27 pm
y can't she know?!?
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 12:28 pm
oh omg ok so...?!
 
VampKitty010 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 12:29 pm
she will disown me as a daughter.
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 12:30 pm
no i meant so wut r u gonna do
 
VampKitty010 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 12:31 pm
ohhhh iunno exactly. i guess just date guys.
 
VampKitty010 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 12:33 pm
noooo lol im with DJ
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 12:44 pm
awesome!!!! tell him i say hi
 
Taylor A. replied...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 1:08 pm
lol... nice..i just told my friend that i was bi and she was like OM REALLY!!! AWESOME and imma need to talk to you later.. lol.. i started to laught
 
Fallen_Cries replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 7:31 am
OMFG one of my storys made to the MAGIZINE<3 omg i am so happy<3
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 11:19 am
cool ok...anything new for anyone?!
 
TiffyBear123 replied...
Apr. 6, 2010 at 11:28 am
new phone!! lol
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 9:11 am
yea i wish i did
 
Fallen_Cries replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 10:20 am
omg... i am so happy,, i hate mood swings:\ amd PMS.. lol but any who whats new?????
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 11:36 am
im on it i just said
 
Fallen_Cries replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 11:38 am
ohhh okayy hahah
 
Fallen_Cries replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 11:41 am
MA BEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 11:41 am
well??? wut happendz um so wut happened with u iz it owl?
 
TiffyBear123 replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 11:42 am
-extremely confused- lol
 
Fallen_Cries replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 11:43 am
well he just changed... idk... he is different!!!
 
VampChick49 replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 9:31 am

can u c thiz now?

 

 
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