Devil'z Trip

March 10, 2010
By VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!


As I place one foot in front of the other I draw a deep breath walking over the corpses of my family and friends into the waiting arms of death he holds the keys to his heart and mine in one hand and a gun in the other. It’z smoking I look away from the evil grin and glowing red eyes and follow his stare to see Adam falling to the ground. I scream a Furious Bloodthirsty defiant screech, grab the gun from his hand shoot him then myself in the heart. As I am falling to the ground next to Adam I wonder were Eddie and Jake are they hadn’t been killed yet. Just before I hit the floor strong hands catch me, It was Eddie and Jake was lifting Adam over his shoulder as Eddie stands me right side up, Stares at the hole in my chest. Just as Jake pushes Eddie out of the way pulls the Pocket Knife that I alwayz carry, cuts his wrist and holds it to my mouth. Wen I’m done turning I turn over and bite Adam just in time, then Eddie for he is not one of us yet. Finally I turn to death, I bites hit wrist and wit for his transformation to be completed. I will torture him for hurting all my loved ones.


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philado said...
on May. 13 2012 at 10:24 am
This would have been easier to understand if you had good grammar. The bad grammar is a real turn-off.

on Jan. 2 2012 at 2:16 pm
Poetry1518 BRONZE, Summerville, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
LIFE is a ROLLERCOASTER; buckle up, take a seat, and try to enjoy the ride!!!!!!!!

PLEASE DON'T READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE NEAREST FRIDAY BY THE ONE YOU LOVE. NOW YOU'VE STARTED READING THIS SO DON'T STOP. THIS IS REALLY FREAKY!!! 1)say your name 10 times 2)say your mom's name 5 times 3)say your crush's name 3 times 4)paste this on 4 other posts. if you do this your crush will kiss you on the nearest friday. if you don't do this after reading this you will get bad luck send this to 4 other post in 143 minutes when done press F6 and the name of your crush will appear on the screen in big letters

on Oct. 6 2011 at 3:28 pm
Juhcub PLATINUM, Congers, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.”

Wow, I really enjoyed this! Very good :)

on Jul. 12 2011 at 10:58 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

I loved the story! Great job! Hey everyone! just posted two of my stories here there called Nightstalker and The Beast. if you read them tell me if you like them or not! Thanks! :D

on Mar. 22 2011 at 5:46 pm
SeigDarkness SILVER, Bronx, New York
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My purpose in life is to protect those closest to me. To be able to that I have to become strong...Strong enough to shatter fate."- Jayson(Me)

Hi!...I really like your story...Power to all vampires!!...

on Jul. 17 2010 at 8:15 pm
Great Start. You should definatly continue this!  

on May. 14 2010 at 1:02 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
1 article 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

hello???!!!!!!!!!!!

on May. 14 2010 at 1:00 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
1 article 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

cool iz anyone there?

 


on May. 14 2010 at 12:58 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
1 article 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

hello  my peoplez

on May. 14 2010 at 12:57 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
1 article 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

hello my pplz

 


on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:40 am
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
1 article 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

any one on and wanna talk?!

tica brenes said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 9:31 am
tica brenes, Spring, Texas
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yupp

 


on Apr. 8 2010 at 9:31 am
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
1 article 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

can u c thiz now?

 


on Apr. 8 2010 at 9:30 am
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
1 article 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

hello tika can u c thiz?

on Apr. 7 2010 at 11:43 am
Raise_Up PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
When i think of you, i end up falling alseep and i dream of you.<-- i wrote that quote
There isnt like looking into your eyes and knowing you will always be there to protect me <3 MADE BY ME ^^i wrote these quotes

well he just changed... idk... he is different!!!

on Apr. 7 2010 at 11:42 am
TiffyLynn SILVER, Spring, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you skittles...throw them at its eyes and yell "TASTE THE RAINBOW!"

-extremely confused- lol

on Apr. 7 2010 at 11:41 am
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
1 article 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

well??? wut happendz um so wut happened with u iz it owl?

on Apr. 7 2010 at 11:41 am
Raise_Up PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
When i think of you, i end up falling alseep and i dream of you.<-- i wrote that quote
There isnt like looking into your eyes and knowing you will always be there to protect me <3 MADE BY ME ^^i wrote these quotes

MA BEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Apr. 7 2010 at 11:39 am
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
1 article 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

oh i have that ok well i said nothing new here and just asking y ur so happy my question iz if u smoke cigz while pms wut happenz?!

on Apr. 7 2010 at 11:38 am
Raise_Up PLATINUM, Tomball, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
When i think of you, i end up falling alseep and i dream of you.<-- i wrote that quote
There isnt like looking into your eyes and knowing you will always be there to protect me <3 MADE BY ME ^^i wrote these quotes

ohhh okayy hahah




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