Dont Tear Us Apart

December 18, 2010
By Anonymous

Dear Mommy,

This is your precious angel writing to you. Its been a while and hard lately on you, I know that. I wish you would smile more, draw a little, go out and see more of life. Cliché it might sound but there is more to life and you deserve so much more then you think. Mom sometimes I think you’re a torus just like me because we are so stubborn. Let people help you, give them a chance and don’t do it all on your own. You have been doing it on your own for awhile now and now its time for a little help. I have started to let people help me once and awhile and it actually feels really nice. Mommy I don’t want you to feel empty anymore, your not a stranger in anyone’s life because your so much more. Your loss of me I know has touched you most but it wont tear us apart. I need you just like you need me and I need you to show the ambition you have trapped away and be free again. I may not say it often but I love you mommy.


Your Precious Angle

The author's comments:
I had written for a scholarship (Oh The Places You will go) and i picked my mom so that i can express just how much influence and inspiration she needs and deserves

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