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Up from the Dark: An epileptic girl's Struggle for her academics and voice

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Rachel D.
Up from the Dark: An epileptic girl's Struggle for her academics and voice
Summary: The story of overcoming things that were hard for me to overcome because of my epilepsy





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GoldRose said...
Jun. 4, 2012 at 9:00 am:
I think that this book was a really well written and great book! You did a good job writing this book.
 
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manda315 said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 10:14 am:
the book was very good. your emotions really spoke in every word :)
 
GoldRose replied...
Jun. 4, 2012 at 9:01 am :
I know that , she did a really good job.
 
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Mystiecub said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 4:48 pm:

Overall, I enjoyed your story; it was really tense and full of emotion.

I gave it a 4/5, however, because I felt there were a few too many grammatical errors. I don't know if any of these were pointed out, but I'll list a few that I saw. I'm not trying to troll or be obnoxious, I'm just trying to help. :)

There's an incomplete sentence. "As I sat on the school bus for the first time. ..." Try putting a comma in-between these two 'statements.'

I used to do this A LOT, but ... (more »)

 
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quton97 said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 7:35 pm:
I really like your book. And your message not to give up. :)
 
writinglikecrazy replied...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 7:36 pm :
thanks for getting my message. 
 
bladeboy12 replied...
Oct. 28, 2011 at 11:28 am :
ive never read that book but if i did i am pretty sure i would like it.
 
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anna19974h said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 10:26 pm:
I loved this book soooo much! Your write with such fluidity and emotion! I could really feel what you were going through. I love it and I would love to see ytou add more chapters :) there are a few grammar errors though. Keep writing :)
 
writinglikecrazy replied...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 7:52 pm :
thanks anna
 
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NeverGrowUp said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 11:22 am:
I really liked the flow of the words, maybe if you could include more detail we could really picture the scene clearly:)
 
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writinglikecrazy said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:57 am:
Thanks I'll check over to make sure
 
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writinglikecrazy said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:56 am:
Thanks for what you told me to imorove on
 
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sunnysky said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:55 am:
I really enjoyed reading your book read it twice.
 
writinglikecrazy replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:56 am :
Thankyou for your comment
 
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geifons said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:54 am:

The only comment I have is that you need more deatail to make it better  and there are some grammer errors

 

 
writinglikecrazy replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:57 am :
Thanks i will check for it
 
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wakoguy said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:52 am:
At first it was a little on the boring side. But when I went to the second and third chapter it became very catchy.
 
anonymous replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:53 am :
i really like the way you wrote your book!
 
writinglikecrazy replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:58 am :
I'll remake the start to make it better
 
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Jessebil said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:50 am:
I really like your story!
 
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