Teen Ink

the book was very good. your emotions really spoke in every word :)

Overall, I enjoyed your story; it was really tense and full of emotion.

I gave it a 4/5, however, because I felt there were a few too many grammatical errors. I don't know if any of these were pointed out, but I'll list a few that I saw. I'm not trying to troll or be obnoxious, I'm just trying to help. :)

There's an incomplete sentence. "As I sat on the school bus for the first time. ..." Try putting a comma in-between these two 'statements.'

I used to do this A LOT, but ... (more »)

I really like your book. And your message not to give up. :)

I loved this book soooo much! Your write with such fluidity and emotion! I could really feel what you were going through. I love it and I would love to see ytou add more chapters :) there are a few grammar errors though. Keep writing :)

I really liked the flow of the words, maybe if you could include more detail we could really picture the scene clearly:)

Thanks I'll check over to make sure

Thanks for what you told me to imorove on

I really enjoyed reading your book read it twice.

The only comment I have is that you need more deatail to make it better  and there are some grammer errors

 

At first it was a little on the boring side. But when I went to the second and third chapter it became very catchy.

I really like your story!

I just got an acount. And when I read your book I am guessing Teen ink has alot of talented writers!

It is good. Only try to fix some errors in there!

I really liked your book.

I loved a lot of parts in your book. Deffinetly when you explain your day dreams. It is so discroptive!

I really enjoyed reading your book look foward to see more chapters!

I really like your book and the way you don't want others to pitty you.

I like your story, and how you battled for sucsess. Very inspiring!

I like what I have seen of your book, and hope to read it soon.

You have a reallly good way to express yourself!

You have such a strong voice. You could see how much you overcame not letting it get into your way!

what a great booK!

You have such a talent to write! Love every page of your story!

It is a good book. Just add more details to make it more discriptive!

 

It is a really good story. Keep writing!

I really love this book. All those comments you got were absulutly true. It seems like you have a good heart and persever as much as you can.