A Rocky Path Denotes Danger

February 11, 2009
By JORGE L LOZANO, LUBBOCK, Texas
JORGE L LOZANO, LUBBOCK, Texas
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Challenge: Using A Costume and A Volunteer, Create A Mood That Defines The Emotion Sought By The Artist


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Bdub555 GOLD said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 9:11 am
Bdub555 GOLD, Keytesville, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"If you speak kind words, you will hear kind echos."

Like of the dramitics of the pictures 

on May. 6 2010 at 8:34 pm
SassyJones GOLD, Los Altos Hills, California
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Favorite Quote:
"We make our fourtunes, and we call them fate" earl of beaconsville.

.rauha i dont really know what your talking about i think his expression is flawless. You think please make dramatic frowns as they shoot someone? please

.rauha said...
on May. 6 2010 at 11:11 am
.rauha, Huntingdon, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is short; buy the shoes."
Haha, not really...how about, "It is what it is."

Oh, something else I just noticed. The ruffles on his sleeve are caught by his fingers on the bottom. It's just a small detail that's bugging me, really, but now I can't stop staring at it. :(

.rauha said...
on May. 6 2010 at 11:09 am
.rauha, Huntingdon, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is short; buy the shoes."
Haha, not really...how about, "It is what it is."

I think I understand what you were going for here, but it didn't quite translate that well. Here are a few pointers that would make the emotion in the picture stronger:

The finger on the trigger needs to be more clearly on the trigger. Get rid of the stones in the background and put him in front of open blue sky, or a cloudy sky, or some such dramatic nature scene. His face needs to convey more anger; try having him frown more fiercely.

Other than that, it's a good picture. :)



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