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By Sarah E., Wethersfield, CT

     

This article is very well-written. The detail and description of the family packing up the car to go to a baseball game is so clear that I can really picture it. I played softball and loved when my dad was at my games to cheer for me. I can’t imagine seeing him collapse and not being able to help.

This article really helped show me all the emotion that’s felt when things go so wrong. That must have been the hardest event of your life and I’m sorry for your loss.




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