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Sample Winning Essays

Check out these recent Teen Ink Educator of the Year Contest winners for
some ideas about how to nominate a special teacher in your life!

Jamil Siddiqui - Math Teacher
by Christopher P., E. Bridgewater, MA


Jean Eisenberg - English Teacher
by Keniel S., Brooklyn, NY


Lynn Shoemaker - Science Teacher
by Kelly D., Barnegat, NJ






Jamil Siddiqui - Math Teacher
by Christopher P., E. Bridgewater, MA


Most people at my school think Mr. Siddiqui is, oh, let's just say "out there." Why? Maybe it's because you can drive by school almost any time on any day of the week and see his car parked in the same spot. Maybe it's because on some afternoons you can hear his bread-maker rumbling in the hallway. Maybe it's because he likes to keep a change of clothes and an arsenal of utensils in his closet. Maybe he is strange. I just think he's committed.

I knew Mr. Siddiqui's calculus class was going to be different from any I had ever taken. One of the first things he said was, "You see your books over there in the corner? Well, take a good look because that's where they're going to stay." Everyone laughed, but to this day, I have yet to pick up a textbook in his classroom.

He explained that he knew more about calculus, or The Calculus as he calls it, than any textbook could ever hope to teach us. That's what I call confidence. Looking back, I realize how much I've grown as an individual. Before calculus, I wasn't exactly the best math student, but I always tried hard. Mr. Siddiqui matched my commitment with twice as much as I gave him. Six days a week until the last person left, Mr. Siddiqui was there to help. He has only one goal for our class - that everyone receive credit on the AP test. High expectations? Well, he guarantees you credit if you're willing to put in the work. That's commitment.

Another difference is Mr. Siddiqui's teaching style. It isn't exactly orthodox. First term, we had three tests, and that was our grade. That's if those grades counted in the first place. You see, one of Mr. Siddiqui's brilliant ideas was the "trig quiz," a timed quiz we had to pass without mistakes for our real grades to even count. You had as many tries as you needed before the term ended. You'd think that would be the worst, but for our second semester we have two timed quizzes to pass, not to mention a quiz every day of the week. Well, except on Fridays - then we have a test.

On Mr. Siddiqui's wall are framed photos, pictures of all his classes. Underneath are the names of those who scored five on the AP exam. It's not unusual after school to find one of these students home from college visiting Mr. Siddiqui. I've talked to kids who've gone through his program, and they all say the same thing. His commitment to his students is unparalleled. Mr. Siddiqui has changed my perception of what a good teacher should be. I've never met anyone so devoted to his students that he's willing to sacrifice afternoons and most weekends to help them. His only request of us is that we put in the effort. That's not a hard request to fulfill.

Going into the exam, our class has adopted the slogan: "All calculus, all the time," and it's proven true, as recently I've spent more time with Mr. Siddiqui than my whole family. Because of his commitment, I feel confident not only to pass the exam, but also hopefully to make the wall. And there's one person I have to thank for that: thank you, Mr. Siddiqui.


Jean Eisenberg - English Teacher
by Keniel S., Brooklyn, NY


I stared at her. I was going to lie to her. I could not tell her that my mother and father abandoned me, that when I left school, I wasn't going to my parents' home but to a group home, that I was extremely unhappy, lonely, depressed. I could not tell her. I would not tell her. But her big crystal eyes looked so compassionate and sincere. I could not help it; she genuinely cared about my well being. I struggled not to say I was a motherless and fatherless child, but naturally I responded to her.

Mrs. Eisenberg, my college advisor and English teacher, turned out to be a wonderful outlet for me to release my pain. Because I told her I lived in a group home, my life changed dramatically: I did not feel the need to hide it anymore or feel abnormal. I did not feel sorry for myself anymore. Mrs. Eisenberg, with her own life and responsibilities, gave her time to hear my problems. She encouraged me daily and smiled whenever I went to see her. The simplest things she said meant so much; she asked about my classes, and hammered into my head the significance of earning a high-school diploma to be able to attend college. I wanted to accomplish all the things she said I was capable of.

Mrs. Eisenberg is an angel in my life. Her words, actions and compassion mean so much. Without her encouragement, I could not and would not have wanted to succeed. As my English teacher, Mrs. Eisenberg has also helped strengthen my writing abilities. With patience and effort, she channeled my strengths and worked on my weaknesses. Through Mrs. Eisenberg, other teachers became aware of my writing abilities. I was no longer just another student; because of Mrs. Eisenberg's admiration, I was given the title "The Writer." I began writing more, eagerly sharing my works with others. It really makes such a difference when someone believes in you.


Lynn Shoemaker - Science Teacher
by Kelly D., Barnegat, NJ


Mrs. Lynne Shoemaker is one of the most amazing people I have ever met. In her class, I feel very relaxed; her energy and knowledge can't be measured. As an honor student, one expects a difficult biology class, and I am lucky to have Mrs. Shoemaker.

When she was only 16, she gave birth to the first of her three children. She had to fight her way back into school, and her child was later diagnosed with diabetes. Another son has a form of dyslexia. He can read, but writes in a language she cannot read. Beating all the odds, Mrs. Shoemaker pursued her education, graduating from high school, then college and more college.

She becomes very close to her students because she understands teens' problems.
When a student asks a question about anything, Mrs. Shoemaker will discuss it, and more questions follow. We don't even need to bring our books to class. If she isn't answering a question, she will show us some of her many treasures, including skulls, jungle slides, snakes and anything we may think is disgusting, but she finds amazing. When we leave class, we too realize those disgusting things are actually quite interesting.

In 1997, Mrs. Shoemaker was chosen to teach in Russia. The next year, she was selected as a leader for science standards by the National Science Teacher Organization because they knew she could make presentations, had many contacts and could accomplish whatever they asked her to do. This October she taught for three weeks in Japan. Her students have received the Presidential Youth Environment Award twice. She currently has six publications under her belt and is only two and a half credits away from her Ph.D. She refuses to teach from books, instead teaching from her experiences.

Mrs. Shoemaker is much more than a biology teacher. One of the biggest things she has done for me is get rid of my fear of snakes. Mrs. Shoemaker brought in her 11-foot snake, Phoenix, to show the class. She said we could touch him, and I did - very lightly. Then I saw how she played with him and treated him as if he were her baby. Day after day, she showed us other snakes and how good they were. Every day my fear faded. Now, the only thing I won't do is watch them eat.

To her students, whom she treats as her children, Mrs. Shoemaker is the greatest. She teaches what others have taught her. The more she enjoys her classes, the more she learns from those students. She is a true treasure, and that is why I am nominating her for Educator of the Year.